VN Ren'Py CrystaLis [v0.1.0] [Azzaro]

[_TRS_]

Please either provide an easy switch between Spanish (?) and English or translate the Options screen, Save Games and "Return (to Game)" buttons with the next release.
Note that Textbox shading, shoud shade make the the textbox shaded, bit the rest of the screen as it does now.

Also cnsider changing the cursor to a standard pointer, as the current icon looks more like a refresh icon, which is cnfusing,

 

[testers123456]

Firstly, almost 1gb of data for not even getting past the mc's arrival night is an issue you may want to look at or people will face large download sizes on future content. It's not bad in general so far and I look forward to seeing how it progresses in future.

 

[Pif paf]

Win/Linux: GDRIVE

we have wrong access rights set here

 

[2 0 0 4 f o r e v e r]

his childhood friend and her mother

 

[MOGGERrn]

This MC is actually more depressed than me. Lol.

 

[zipwad]

Wow this title made me think of an old NES game called "Crystalis" It was a gem for its time.

Came here just to see if anyone else mentioned it...

 

[kazeiheikaya]

The dialogue in this game is just straight out of Max Payne, honestly lmao.

The edge is never ending! just a small rec to tone it down a bit, the dramatic quip for every single menial task or action that happens The monologues are like:

"Uh a gathering of people, it reminds me of a summer sale in Wal-mart, a collection of loud buzzing vultures shrieking at one another for slim pickings of the carcass of remaining items left on the rack"

It comes off a bit exhausting. Banters fine, sarcasms fine, renders are good. Everything is shaped up well. Thats my only complaint so far, other then the fairly obvious short opener. Goodluck!

 

[DyonisXX]

LET'S FUCKIN GOOOO HS2 GAME WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

 

[Horny Developer]

Great, it looks good - my rate is 4/5, I cut 1 point for without horny scene ))

 

[Atomic Blastoid]

This looks good, don't mess up lad. Good luck!!

 

[Dyhart]

At least this is clear on how its pronounced

crystal-iss(like hiss) is how I always pronounced it.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

It's short, but a good start, can't wait to see more.

 

[DyonisXX]

Game has way too much internal edgy yapping, and also too many analogies

We don't know anything about the MC so I have no idea if he's an edgelord for no reason or if the way he's feeling is justfied

 

[Woodstock_1983]

Is there away to make this English?

 

[Machete]

Is there away to make this English? View attachment 5014678

It's all english already. I don't veo what other opciones puedes be.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I don't veo what other opciones puedes be.

Huh? I don't understand what you're saying. I only understand English.

 

[Machete]

Huh? I don't understand what you're saying. I only understand English.

Dude, i was jocking mixing spanish and english like that menu and pretending it was all english.

By the way there is nothing you can do. The translation is clearly bugged. Probably some issue with the placeholders or with the linguistic files.

 

[9537]

这个游戏看起来不错，期待更新

 

[etidhxc]

short, but solid! looking forward to future updates

 

[Indexless]

Love the character designs, just need to wait and see how the writing turns out. Hope it gets less edgy as it goes on but it's not bad so far.