Okay DarkSithLord47,
Normally I wouldn’t engage with someone that I am well aware of but I’m in a good mood so I’ll bite.
You seem to have a “catch up” point in mind. So I’d genuinely love to hear what that is from a narrative/content point of view. “More content” isn’t an answer. Where is the catch up point for you?
Like I said, I take feedback into account as much as possible. So give me feedback.
mind if i step up to give you that feedback and as
DarkSithLord47 said.
I did in fact talked you about this when you took the job to write the game and as i said in my other post i can see how other writers may have hurt you with doing the script, i have played the 2 chapter and you have the oportunity to amend both routes, i will not dare to give you feedback about the ntr route because i dont play it and there is 1000 people here more adecuate to give you the feedback for that route so i want to also say that this post wont be in anyway any hate towards those that like ntr but an opinión of how to improve the non ntr so bear with me guys .
As i did tell you when you took the job to write the game, a non ntr should be the mc & girls so when you want to write a non ntr route you should center that route in the girls and mc, you can make the mc beat those guys that are always coming on our girls or blackmail them etc wathever you can think off is up to you to write but make that so they never appear again (that way both you and the one doing the render will not have to work on unnecesary stuff) dont keep them coming in a non ntr route because what people want is content with the girls and mc, so far you both have fail in that category ( center the alpha route as non ntr will be a way to avoid that, you guys did want to have also a alpha route with ntr and that ended up being too much work and certainly no easy task to write and make people happy)
You guys think as some other devs that incest is something that must come as blueballing updates but thats not true, take icstor as an example, the mc can show the mom and sis how much he loves them and how he will protect them making it easier for both of them to acept having a relationship with him (use the whole of culture shock as something that is accepted, considering the date the mc have with the mom, they in fact did see a mother and son kinda *making out* in publick, use that to make the mom & sis to acept theyr feeling for the mc and make them advance the relationship faster using a secondary girl, for example make the mc fuck some girl in his room and make sure the sis or the mom see that, use that to make them "fear" losing the mc to some random girl and more willing to acept having sex with mc so the mc dont have to look it elsewhere etc.
As i said blueball updates saying that incest needs time to nurture is nothing but bad creativity in the writer or simply bad writing, i dont think you are a bad writer so i think maybe a bit of feedback is in fact a good thing to give you ideas of how to make that happen.
Hope this help if even a Little, you acepting feedback is something atleast to admire in a devs/writers personal qualities.
since i forget in my other post.... Happy holidays to you all