from the point of view of the style of writing the plot, it reminded me of one of my favorite games - Tales Of Androgyny, Futadom World, Cross dressing in Camelot and Two Faceless Adventures (of course I could remember more, but these are the first ones that came to mind). Of course, everyone has their own taste for it, but in my humble opinion, these are some of the best projects in their style, and the lyrics are awesome. But, to be fair, your project is still different, I won't lie that it's better, now it's too small, but it definitely has potential. It's hard for me to say what exactly is different, it's like drawing in games, there is conveyor stamping, and there is an author's work.
