VN Ren'Py Cursed Forest Quest [v0.4.4] [Pray For Fantasy Girls]

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ANON_NYMOUS

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all_spinach said:
so I don't mean this as criticism im just curious, dev did you use chat GPT to help write at all? this is something im more curious about than anything since it's a new kind of thing thats hard to recognize. mainly I found it pretty surprising how verbose the wife is, like, sometimes spitting out 3 lines in a row that max out the textbox, that's pretty unique not many authors feel comfortable writing that much for a heroine. she also can be weirdly polite in the kind of way chat gpt sometimes is, like her praising the MC in bed felt almost like chat gpt praising someone for a good prompt. anyway i just got the vibe that you may have written a line then asked chatgpt "rewrite this in the style of a regal condescending elf" and then it returned massive chunks of text. but my bad if that's not true I may be getting really into my own head here I just thought i'd be pretty neat if in 2025 characters are written easier with chat gpt in that way
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Are you senile or just plain stupid?
 
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Shirafune

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TopShaggerTed said:
Maybe Durrak for some reason will know how to "treat it" and keep healing her in secret or something like:

"It appears that virgin semen (or a ointment) is a cure to this"

(Like what Knight said)

"And it must be applied orally!!!"

(This is shitposty ofc)
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Ye he'll cum on her ass
 
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all_spinach

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Wizmoe said:
We are toast as a society when the most likely explanation for verbose characters in literature is AI.
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ya, it's just really rare in ntr games for characters to talk that much and with that kinda style... and the writing otherwise can be kinda weird with a lot of typos and weird phrasing which would make me expect characters not to talk too much, you dont really see kind of awkward writing yet also characters that yap a lot just in my experience

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i guess i should post an example too, at the end of the first sex scene she goes like

My-my, look at this mess! We should have thought ahead and prepared a towel. Now it's going to be such a hassle to clean up. It's not something you should burn yourself with, darling. You must be terribly tired after giving it your all. I'll see to everything myself. I just hope there's some warm water left for me to wash up. Don't wait for me, [Name]. Go to sleep and I'll be by your side when you wake up in the morning. Sweet dreams, my dear champion! And to thank you for this marvelous, unforgettable night!
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i gotta say in all my time fappin ive never seen a girl yap so much, and "to thank you for this marvelous, unforgettable night" at the end felt like chatgpt saying "thank you for this marvelous prompt." and idk "not something you should burn yourself with" is kind of weird too, i don't even think thats a real phrase

but yeah idk i was just curious. it doesnt really matter either way. if it's not chatgpt it's just a really unique writing style in which case props to the devs.
 
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mtl poet

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all_spinach said:
if it's not chatgpt it's just a really unique writing style in which case props to the devs.
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The developers most likely made them speak this way to further emphasize that this is a fictional medieval setting, the character's background/social status/w.e, and/or also to provide a full contrast to Durrak's crude way of speaking.

P.S. I'm currently writing a story with a similar style to this (and HPMF). If you dare tell me that my writing reads like a byproduct of chatgpt, I will personally track down your IP, go to your house, and hang you by your testicles (this is a joke ofc... but not really).
 
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all_spinach

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mtl poet said:
The developers most likely made them speak this way to further emphasize that this is a fictional medieval setting, the character's background/social status/w.e, and/or also to provide a full contrast to Durrak's crude way of speaking.

P.S. I'm currently writing a story with a similar style to this (and HPMF). If you dare tell me that my writing reads like a byproduct of chatgpt, I will personally track down your IP, go to your house, and hang you by your testicles (this is a joke ofc... but not really).
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nah i mean its not like im talkin about medieval stuff. i dont read wheel of time or w/e and say chatgpt. HPMF is great of course, no issue with the writing there. not like i'd say this about every single ntr game with a lot of text. its about the details. but IDK it may just be the author's style in which case fair enough
 
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Ser Lordypants

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all_spinach said:
ya, it's just really rare in ntr games for characters to talk that much and with that kinda style... and the writing otherwise can be kinda weird with a lot of typos and weird phrasing which would make me expect characters not to talk too much, you dont really see kind of awkward writing yet also characters that yap a lot just in my experience

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i guess i should post an example too, at the end of the first sex scene she goes like



i gotta say in all my time fappin ive never seen a girl yap so much, and "to thank you for this marvelous, unforgettable night" at the end felt like chatgpt saying "thank you for this marvelous prompt." and idk "not something you should burn yourself with" is kind of weird too, i don't even think thats a real phrase

but yeah idk i was just curious. it doesnt really matter either way. if it's not chatgpt it's just a really unique writing style in which case props to the devs.
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This one's being developed by several people. It feels like the art takes the longest and the writer has too much time on his hands.

And she's just a yapper. A royal elven yapper.
 
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Random_dude12 said:
I just want to leave a review based on my opinion and the feedback I’ve read from others here. The game and story itself are very good, as well as the visuals—there's no doubt about that, it's really top-notch. However, the problem is that there’s way too much unnecessary text, and it often beats around the bush without getting to the point. It feels like things are repeating themselves without moving forward. It’s clear why people are playing this game, and it’s not just for reading a book. In the end, it’s your game, and you can decide how you want to approach it, but I just wanted to share my thoughts along with what others have mentioned in the comments. Maybe it helps
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Why Tf is nobody talking about the endless walls of text except you??!
Like seriously, you don't have to explain how you can open a bottle of water in 10 different sentences... this is ridicules!!
 
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worldkaiser said:
Why Tf is nobody talking about the endless walls of text except you??!
Like seriously, you don't have to explain how you can open a bottle of water in 10 different sentences... this is ridicules!!
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Tbf I think a lot of people do just skip the text to see the scenes.

Though from someone who doesn't, yeah it definitely is overwhelming at times
 
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