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bloodsport

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A very mediocre update imo, scenes were really short and the animation and sounds didn't add anything. My biggest issue though is the writing being a big downgrade imo and I would honestly say he needs to accept that he needs to hire another person to write because both Durrak and Vallabelle seemed OOC considering in his own words about other people's writing was "the characters seem inconsistent and out of place". Considering the last update ended with her angry over what happened and this one just starts off as if nothing happened it feels like we've just missed a whole section of plot. I'm not even an NTR person and was here for the slow corruption and both scenes just felt he was rushing to advance the corruption without it feeling natural, I thought it would've turned into Durrak either deceiving her or wanting more "favors" for having to make the potions for the MC but instead it just goes back to her having to "heal" him. The reuse of CGs seemed a lot more blatant here too.
 

CERVIXPIERCER

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A very mediocre update imo, scenes were really short and the animation and sounds didn't add anything. My biggest issue though is the writing being a big downgrade imo and I would honestly say he needs to accept that he needs to hire another person to write because both Durrak and Vallabelle seemed OOC considering in his own words about other people's writing was "the characters seem inconsistent and out of place". Considering the last update ended with her angry over what happened and this one just starts off as if nothing happened it feels like we've just missed a whole section of plot. I'm not even an NTR person and was here for the slow corruption and both scenes just felt he was rushing to advance the corruption without it feeling natural, I thought it would've turned into Durrak either deceiving her or wanting more "favors" for having to make the potions for the MC but instead it just goes back to her having to "heal" him. The reuse of CGs seemed a lot more blatant here too.
its like the new writer didnt even read anything beforehand and was just given a character chart
 

Omahrjim

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A very mediocre update imo, scenes were really short and the animation and sounds didn't add anything. My biggest issue though is the writing being a big downgrade imo and I would honestly say he needs to accept that he needs to hire another person to write because both Durrak and Vallabelle seemed OOC considering in his own words about other people's writing was "the characters seem inconsistent and out of place". Considering the last update ended with her angry over what happened and this one just starts off as if nothing happened it feels like we've just missed a whole section of plot. I'm not even an NTR person and was here for the slow corruption and both scenes just felt he was rushing to advance the corruption without it feeling natural, I thought it would've turned into Durrak either deceiving her or wanting more "favors" for having to make the potions for the MC but instead it just goes back to her having to "heal" him. The reuse of CGs seemed a lot more blatant here too.
These updates arnt supposed to be long and yes he’s aware the audio and the animation wasn’t the best. I also wrote that the development of last update felt completely forgotten considering she just willingly excepted everything durrak asked I wrote this to him too and he liked my comment he replied to the comment but only commented on the animation so hopefully he’s taking the writing into account(because I wrote a lot of thoughts on the update) it’s not the end of the world but it definitely felt like Valle in particular was too agreeable.
 

Omahrjim

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A very mediocre update imo, scenes were really short and the animation and sounds didn't add anything. My biggest issue though is the writing being a big downgrade imo and I would honestly say he needs to accept that he needs to hire another person to write because both Durrak and Vallabelle seemed OOC considering in his own words about other people's writing was "the characters seem inconsistent and out of place". Considering the last update ended with her angry over what happened and this one just starts off as if nothing happened it feels like we've just missed a whole section of plot. I'm not even an NTR person and was here for the slow corruption and both scenes just felt he was rushing to advance the corruption without it feeling natural, I thought it would've turned into Durrak either deceiving her or wanting more "favors" for having to make the potions for the MC but instead it just goes back to her having to "heal" him. The reuse of CGs seemed a lot more blatant here too.
A very mediocre update imo, scenes were really short and the animation and sounds didn't add anything. My biggest issue though is the writing being a big downgrade imo and I would honestly say he needs to accept that he needs to hire another person to write because both Durrak and Vallabelle seemed OOC considering in his own words about other people's writing was "the characters seem inconsistent and out of place". Considering the last update ended with her angry over what happened and this one just starts off as if nothing happened it feels like we've just missed a whole section of plot. I'm not even an NTR person and was here for the slow corruption and both scenes just felt he was rushing to advance the corruption without it feeling natural, I thought it would've turned into Durrak either deceiving her or wanting more "favors" for having to make the potions for the MC but instead it just goes back to her having to "heal" him. The reuse of CGs seemed a lot more blatant here too.
THIS IS WHAT I WROTE AS A REVIEW OF THE UPDATE IF YOURE CURIOUS “Thoughts on the update. I thought the update was good the scenes were good im still iffy on the animation it was ok but i think two frame motions can be more expressive overall the animations were not as bad as i thought they would be if animations will delay the game more i prefer they not be in the game rn though, also the two frame animation were durrak slapped vellas ass updates ago was infinitely more expressive than if it had been a single frame "animation" that's the main reason i don't like this type of animation because i feel it takes away alot from the art by just having moving single frame stills. Two or three frame motions allow you to be more creative. The sound was ok but it didn't add much to the game i rather hear Vella ass clapping than the sound of durrak jerking his cock i feel one should have clearly been prioritized overall sound was not great imo i rather sound be added later if this is the best we get, hearing durrak tell valle to clap her cheeks but all we hear is him jerking his cock is honestly a turn off. Everything else was great story wise even though Valle did have some push back it felt like she gave in a lot faster and durrak didn't even have to rely on his tricks to make her do something Valle was still in character but seemed a lot less bothered by stuff even in last update would make her furious. Its not a deal breaker especially cause i know eventually it will get hard to progress the story. Anyways good update overall i think the animation and sound should not be prioritized right now if it will make updates take longer imo the sound didn't add anything to the experience and the animation was ok nothing special, sound could be prioritized if it’s more “neuron activating sounds” rather than Durrak jerkin it, thanks again for your work hope next update comes sooner and i hope you can talk to us more frequently about potential delays game continues to be great good luck finding your rhythm. SIDE note i still think Durrak cum could look a lot more grotesque i don't know how to explain it maybe making a bit more yellow and maybe adding some cloudy "sex: musk to the erotic scenes would make the erotic scenes better considering durrak himself is grotesque i think the erotic scenes look too "clean" i still think the cum you draw looks too much like a blob and too round rather than a stringy sticky splatter. The way the cum looks so round and shiny looks weird to me it might just be a reflection of your art style but a small adjustment to how you draw it would add alot to the scenes cause sometimes its doesn't even look like cum just look like a blob.”
 
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bloodsport

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These updates arnt supposed to be long and yes he’s aware the audio and the animation wasn’t the best. I also wrote that the development of last update felt completely forgotten considering she just willingly excepted everything durrak asked I wrote this to him too and he liked my comment he replied to the comment but only commented on the animation so hopefully he’s taking the writing into account(because I wrote a lot of thoughts on the update) it’s not the end of the world but it definitely felt like Valle in particular was too agreeable.
THIS IS WHAT I WROTE AS A REVIEW OF THE UPDATE IF YOURE CURIOUS “Thoughts on the update. I thought the update was good the scenes were good im still iffy on the animation it was ok but i think two frame motions can be more expressive overall the animations were not as bad as i thought they would be if animations will delay the game more i prefer they not be in the game rn though, also the two frame animation were durrak slapped vellas ass updates ago was infinitely more expressive than if it had been a single frame "animation" that's the main reason i don't like this type of animation because i feel it takes away alot from the art by just having moving single frame stills. Two or three frame motions allow you to be more creative. The sound was ok but it didn't add much to the game i rather hear Vella ass clapping than the sound of durrak jerking his cock i feel one should have clearly been prioritized overall sound was not great imo i rather sound be added later if this is the best we get, hearing durrak tell valle to clap her cheeks but all we hear is him jerking his cock is honestly a turn off. Everything else was great story wise even though Valle did have some push back it felt like she gave in a lot faster and durrak didn't even have to rely on his tricks to make her do something Valle was still in character but seemed a lot less bothered by stuff even in last update would make her furious. Its not a deal breaker especially cause i know eventually it will get hard to progress the story. Anyways good update overall i think the animation and sound should not be prioritized right now if it will make updates take longer imo the sound didn't add anything to the experience and the animation was ok nothing special, sound could be prioritized if it’s more “neuron activating sounds” rather than Durrak jerkin it, thanks again for your work hope next update comes sooner and i hope you can talk to us more frequently about potential delays game continues to be great good luck finding your rhythm. SIDE note i still think Durrak cum could look a lot more grotesque i don't know how to explain it maybe making a bit more yellow and maybe adding some cloudy "sex: musk to the erotic scenes would make the erotic scenes better considering durrak himself is grotesque i think the erotic scenes look too "clean" i still think the cum you draw looks too much like a blob and too round rather than a stringy sticky splatter. The way the cum looks so round and shiny looks weird to me it might just be a reflection of your art style but a small adjustment to how you draw it would add alot to the scenes cause sometimes its doesn't even look like cum just look like a blob.”
I understand the demos are short but I just think the pacing of the scenes could've been drawn out a lot more. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks the corruption for this update could've had more work, I'm hoping the dev will take it into account but I still think he should hire a writer because the writing here just seemed off.

Personally I'm going to wait and see if he stays true to his word and future updates are of better quality before considering pledging again, it doesn't help that the lack of communication, him choosing to prioritize the budget on things that are not essential during this stage of the game's development and the dev already having an abandoned game in his prior work which he hasn't acknowledged himself pulled me away from supporting.
 

Omahrjim

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I understand the demos are short but I just think the pacing of the scenes could've been drawn out a lot more. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks the corruption for this update could've had more work, I'm hoping the dev will take it into account but I still think he should hire a writer because the writing here just seemed off.

Personally I'm going to wait and see if he stays true to his word and future updates are of better quality before considering pledging again, it doesn't help that the lack of communication, him choosing to prioritize the budget on things that are not essential during this stage of the game's development and the dev already having an abandoned game in his prior work which he hasn't acknowledged himself pulled me away from supporting.
Yea him putting so much on making the game “better” aka sound, animations and now even voice acting I think is over kill the most I ever asked for was sound but a lot of people hyped him up into making the game the “BEST” game ever now I think he’s over investing on things that are probably gonna be half assed also I don’t think voices are required at all especially if the voice doesn’t match the character it could ruin the immersion of the game. If he literally invested all his resources into more art that’s all anyone would ask for. ART> Voice and Animations. Also yes I don’t blame you this last two months were rough I hope he can get back into the flow he had before but we shall see.
 

Zaychikz

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Going 3 years without a single update isn’t being a developer — it’s scamming. We shouldn’t normalize that level of neglect as acceptable or set the bar that low.

Like I said before, this dev has shown all the classic red flags of potentially abandoning the project.

And let’s not forget, he was also involved in another game that quietly disappeared over a year ago with zero communication or closure.

That kind of pattern is worrisome , the signs are there and are not good ones.

I hope im wrong but im going to wait a couple of months before trusting him again.
Like I said if the Dev is really trying hard to finish the game then I'll give it a chance.
He also needs to communicate more to his supporters a simple announcement last week should be said that the update will be delayed in order prevent backlash to his audience.

If one of you guys are his subscribers please message him to communicate more.
 
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Zaychikz

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Voice acting is fully unecessary, you'd be far better served using that money on what actually matters--buying yourself the free time required for longer content updates. Keep in mind this is a porn game, and we're not here for the voices.

As for animation...I personally think it adds little value, because it's one of those things that people don't quite notice if it's done right but gets rather jarring if done badly. I always point to Karryn's Prison for an example of how an excellent game does not need animated scenes--it's all stills and variants, but I consider it one of the best on this forum.
I completely agree a voice acting is really unnecessary and a waste of money,

If it's interjection then I'm okay with it but a fully voice characters is really unnecessarily.
 

Omahrjim

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Like I said if the Dev is really trying hard to finish the game then I'll give it a chance.
He also needs to communicate more to his supporters a simple announcement last week should be said that the update will be delayed in order prevent backlash to his audience.

If one of you guys are his subscribers please message him to communicate more.
plenty have already but i don't know if he wants to log in if he doesn't have anything substantial to say or at least thats how hes replied to people that want more communication.
 

bloodsport

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plenty have already but i don't know if he wants to log in if he doesn't have anything substantial to say or at least thats how hes replied to people that want more communication.
I don't understand why he chooses to do this, even if you don't have any substantial news. If people who are paying you money to develop the game are asking to be updated about what's going on, at least give them an update no matter how small.
 

Omahrjim

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I don't understand why he chooses to do this, even if you don't have any substantial news. If people who are paying you money to develop the game are asking to be updated about what's going on, at least give them an update no matter how small.
If he had a discord it would also make it alot easier too tbh.
 

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First scene is Durrak jerking off while she spreads her ass and he pulls her leotard to see more.
Second scene takes place right after the first and he jerks off while she jiggles her ass and ends up cumming on it (this part has some animation and some sound but the scene just kind of abruptly ends afterwards)
hmmmm so no sex yet?
 
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