VN Ren'Py Cypris [v0.2] [Dr.Nam]

[Paradox004]

I hope if the "bimbofication" is gonna lead to "transformation" (as in increased breast size), it can be avoided. Not everyone needs tits bigger than my head.

Edit: Oh, I see it's going to be very linear and effectively a kinetic novel. Should just add the tag then, so it gets auto-avoided by people like me. I'm here to make choices, not watch something. I can go to PornHub or whatever for that.

 

[TTTBBB123]

You can look into game like Corruption and make the bimbofication, go as far as that level. And just don't overboard with breast stuff, it gonna make them look like cheap plastic blowup doll.

 

[gthmf]

I hope if the "bimbofication" is gonna lead to "transformation" (as in increased breast size), it can be avoided. Not everyone needs tits bigger than my head.

Edit: Oh, I see it's going to be very linear and effectively a kinetic novel. Should just add the tag then, so it gets auto-avoided by people like me. I'm here to make choices, not watch something. I can go to PornHub or whatever for that.

Udders are revolting. I tap out at D's. Pref is C's and B's. Also, huge fake lips, hell, fake anything, is gross.

 

[Incognito9]

Good start. I noticed you have a few grammatical verb errors. Also, image 159 was missing.

 

[frogbert]

./.maybe...best.......overview evar

 

[AnyName'llDo]

Good start. For English verb conjugation in the present tense, if you/they/I do something the verb that follows will not be pluralized.

You walk.
I walk.
Steve walks. <--- Singular person other than you or I is the only time a verb will end in s.
They walk.
We walk.

Not being critical of your grammar. It's much better than I speak any other language. Hopefully, this is helpful and not annoying.

 

[Pgsurprise]

./.maybe...best.......overview evar

There's no way I believe there's going to be a story here if the overview doesn't even make it clear who the MC is.

 

[Dr.Nam]

There's no way I believe there's going to be a story here if the overview doesn't even make it clear who the MC is.

sorry, the overview was just supposed to be a placeholder from the uploader, but it was funny XD so I didnt ask him to change it

 

[Pgsurprise]

sorry, the overview was just supposed to be a placeholder from the uploader, but it was funny XD so I didnt ask him to change it

Sorry, that probably came off ruder than I meant it to. But, I'm just getting more and more frustrated with overviews that don't give any clue to what the story is and reading through reviews and the threads to get any info. I play these games more for the story than the visuals, so if the overview doesn't offer anything to tell me what to expect, it doesn't make me want to try it. So, I stand by the critique, but apologize for how I said it. Regardless, good luck with your game.

 

[OniBrigade]

A very nice update. Will there be content involving both the mother and daughter at the same time?

 

[Dr.Nam]

Will there be content involving both the mother and daughter at the same time?

yes