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Raindrops400

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Jan 6, 2022
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Are each of the characters feature complete, or are they gonna be expanded further?

Also, which character has the most watersports/piss/urination scenes? I love those <3
 

Oliz82

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Mar 15, 2021
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Hello.

The summary and possible bi path made me come. But the result isn't for me (too furry centered).

The wordlbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is interesting.
The artistic side is simple and basic but do the job.

The protagonist explores a fantasy world and interact with those he encounters.
The flow of event seems all right.
The characters have diverse personalities, though they are all welcoming, which is strange. Some should be more reserved or distant, even gruff or unpleasant (the only time with the yellow strippes is quickly dissolved when Ethan speaks). Some presentations are too short (like "this is Herrold" or when visiting the baroness lands the first time (what is supposed to be a baroness in this world? why would she even want to meet him while he hasn't done any feat yet?)). It's often too succinct when an explaination is brought.
The artistic side is limited to some portraits and character builds, plus a background. The ? on the portraits are annoying. The writing style is too uniform and lack colors. Having the name of the person talking in dialog boxes would be nice.

Overall, I did every locations to know who we were able to meet and stopped after that. I thought that with a human MC we could have some human NPC but it's a furry only game, unfortunately. The rest seemed good though.

Good continuation.
 
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Caretaker17

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Jul 25, 2022
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Hello.
But the result isn't for me (too furry centered).

Some should be more reserved or distant, even gruff or unpleasant
Thank you for your comment! I would like to eventually add some more humans, elves, orcs and more conventional fantasy races as options foe encounters but my priority especially at the start here is anthros.

As for everyone being too pleasant and forthcoming, I think that stems from me playing too many tabletop games where everyone you run into is an asshat who doesn't want anything to do with you. I find that sort of interation really tiring and annoying - but I do think I may have overcorrected in the other direction.

Thank you everyone else for your various comments, and the surprising amount of pleasant words about the art. I am trying my best. Art is quite limited. With only a select few pictures here and there.
 

nackedsnake

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Jan 29, 2019
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I did not read that title correctly. Its Dewclaws not Deathclaws. I was wondering what this had to do with Fallout.
No shit. Didn't realise until now (The Dagger in front also doesn't help).
Now instead of giving a post-apocalypse vibe, it sorta gives a comfy vibe (Stardew...)

Also didn't realise my "Arts kinda rough" comment stirred quite a bit.
Caretaker17 you don't really need to address it in such negative manner. This is a text-based game, good arts are nice addition but not expected. Focusing on things that matters.
I'd avoid shoehorn in half-assed arts / AI arts that doesn't really fit into the game world.
Also, allow players to add their own images will go a long way.
 
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