VN Ren'Py Daily Challenges [v0.3.0] [TheAlex]

[Lurker1001]

Very good early release. I am looking forward to more. You just need to patch up the naming stuff a bit. Names are fine in dialogue, but not on the window headers. MC is fine though.

Also, you will probably want to up the childhood friend's age from 15 to 18. I don't care personally, but why attract unnecessary heat. OR... let people set his age with a default being 18.

 

[The_Alex]

Very good early release. I am looking forward to more. You just need to patch up the naming stuff a bit. Names are fine in dialogue, but not on the window headers. MC is fine though.

Also, you will probably want to up the childhood friend's age from 15 to 18. I don't care personally, but why attract unnecessary heat. OR... let people set his age with a default being 18.

Did you play v2.1 or v2.1.alpha? Yesterday I uploaded v2.1 where the naming bug should be fixed.

As for the boys age: It‘s the MC‘s age minus 3. If anyone would want him 18 years old, he will just have to set MCs age to 21.
But maybe I should mention that during the intro.

 

[TomUK]

Did you play v2.1 or v2.1.alpha? Yesterday I uploaded v2.1 where the naming bug should be fixed.

As for the boys age: It‘s the MC‘s age minus 3. If anyone would want him 18 years old, he will just have to set MCs age to 21.
But maybe I should mention that during the intro.

To be honest I thought that the default age for her at 26 was a joke, probably should have been set at 21 to start with, although the boy doesn't look or act much older than 13 and she could easily pass as just 16.

 

[The_Alex]

To be honest I thought that the default age for her at 26 was a joke, probably should have been set at 21 to start with, although the boy doesn't look or act much older than 13 and she could easily pass as just 16.

You're right... 21 it is from now on.
And really? She looks that young for you? The goal was to create her not younger looking than 16, but I think that's a very subjective feeling, which means that Trixie probably looks different ages to everyone.

 

[Horny Little Brother]

You're right... 21 it is from now on.
And really? She looks that young for you? The goal was to create her not younger looking than 16, but I think that's a very subjective feeling, which means that Trixie probably looks different ages to everyone.

All the characters look great dude, you can't make everyone happy :/

 

[Humalien]

You're right... 21 it is from now on.
And really? She looks that young for you? The goal was to create her not younger looking than 16, but I think that's a very subjective feeling, which means that Trixie probably looks different ages to everyone.

I’d estimate her age to be between 17 - 18. If someone thinks that 14-year-olds look like this, they should stop using Instagram

 

[TomUK]

You're right... 21 it is from now on.
And really? She looks that young for you? The goal was to create her not younger looking than 16, but I think that's a very subjective feeling, which means that Trixie probably looks different ages to everyone.

Yeah, just the US is stuck on 18, most other countries have a lower age restriction for sex.

As I said, she could pass for 16 body wise and she seems to be very inexperienced, even for a 21 year old. But it's good you have put the ability to set her age, it just makes it feel better to set her age to 18 or something, if anything so that the boy can be age appropriate to his actions.

But I still like the game so far.

 

[Humalien]

Yeah, just the US is stuck on 18, most other countries have a lower age restriction for sex.

As I said, she could pass for 16 body wise and she seems to be very inexperienced, even for a 21 year old. But it's good you have put the ability to set her age, it just makes it feel better to set her age to 18 or something, if anything so that the boy can be age appropriate to his actions.

But I still like the game so far.

In Polish law, there is a provision called "age of consent," which means that a person who is AT LEAST 15 years old can consciously agree to sex. For me, that’s way too young, but... it does protect many men from intrusive girls who might try to deceive eager guys. Of course, in court, you have to prove that she consented on her own without manipulation or pressure... good luck if they imprison you instead of her.

 

[Lurker1001]

Did you play v2.1 or v2.1.alpha? Yesterday I uploaded v2.1 where the naming bug should be fixed.

As for the boys age: It‘s the MC‘s age minus 3. If anyone would want him 18 years old, he will just have to set MCs age to 21.
But maybe I should mention that during the intro.

Ahh, cool
I didn't realize that. Can you do an else if sort of thing and make it minimum age 18? Out of curiosity

 

[Lurker1001]

You're right... 21 it is from now on.
And really? She looks that young for you? The goal was to create her not younger looking than 16, but I think that's a very subjective feeling, which means that Trixie probably looks different ages to everyone.

The issue is with Daz I think. the age morphs are either child, larger child, smaller adult, larger adult, exaggerated old. I've never been able to get a passing late teen appearance..

 

[Lurker1001]

In Polish law, there is a provision called "age of consent," which means that a person who is AT LEAST 15 years old can consciously agree to sex. For me, that’s way too young, but... it does protect many men from intrusive girls who might try to deceive eager guys. Of course, in court, you have to prove that she consented on her own without manipulation or pressure... good luck if they imprison you instead of her.

Most of North American Age of consent is actually younger. The issue comes into pornographic depictions being under 18 and then child pornography laws taking over. (Pixels shouldn't count, but storytelling does so I guess they role that in with it.)
Age of consent is also a very varied thing with some provisions like consent with someone who is in a position of authority automatically bumps it up to 18 or 19, where it is normally younger.
For the sake of making things off the radar, just a 21/18 thing as default would suffice. If people chose younger then that is on them.

 

[Humalien]

The issue is with Daz I think. the age morphs are either child, larger child, smaller adult, larger adult, exaggerated old. I've never been able to get a passing late teen appearance..

It's probably because you have poor role models. For example, look at how Rihanna looked before and after pregnancy. This clearly shows the difference between a girl and a woman. If you're basing your model on a teenage look but without considering how she would appear as a mature MILF, it's hard to catch the small details that our subconscious picks up but we aren't consciously aware of.

 

[Lurker1001]

It's probably because you have poor role models. For example, look at how Rihanna looked before and after pregnancy. This clearly shows the difference between a girl and a woman. If you're basing your model on a teenage look but without considering how she would appear as a mature MILF, it's hard to catch the small details that our subconscious picks up but we aren't consciously aware of.

So random ad hominem that makes no sense to the conversation...
My role models are fine, son. You are just looking for a fight. Go look elsewhere.

 

[The_Alex]

Ahh, cool
I didn't realize that. Can you do an else if sort of thing and make it minimum age 18? Out of curiosity

Yes I could, but I won't.

 

[Humalien]

So random ad hominem that makes no sense to the conversation...
My role models are fine, son. You are just looking for a fight. Go look elsewhere.

<facepalm> I'm not attacking anyone. I'm merely suggesting that replicating a person's face and tricking our minds is incredibly challenging. Many artists who specialize in "realistic portraits" spend their entire lives honing their techniques, and even then, they're not always perfect.

 

[Lurker1001]

<facepalm> I'm not attacking anyone. I'm merely suggesting that replicating a person's face and tricking our minds is incredibly challenging. Many artists who specialize in "realistic portraits" spend their entire lives honing their techniques, and even then, they're not always perfect.

I was talking about DAZ Model limitations. The age sliders only change sizes or add exaggerated features. Fine tuning is severely limited. So unless you are good with other modeling programs that export to daz. You will have a rough time with late teens and middle aged people.
Im actually a graphic artist and manage faces of any age just fine Outside of Daz.

The role model comment came across as trolling and attack.
Ill trust that was not intended though.

 

[JoSolo]

Good start! Really liking the characters and story so far, keep it up!

 

[Horny Little Brother]

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[The_Alex]

Updates are very, very short
I always prefer quality to quantity, but the quantity of this game is extremely low!

Thanx for your constructive review. I hear you and I want you to know that I'm doing my best to increase the qualitiy of the game. The next update will contain several more options for interactivity.
What you said about darkness: I don't want the game to be dark. I'm aiming for a mixture of funny and casual storytelling, nothing too deep. Maybe that will change in possible future games but for now I wanna keep it simple.

 

[Enlight432]

Thanx for your constructive review. I hear you and I want you to know that I'm doing my best to increase the qualitiy of the game. The next update will contain several more options for interactivity.

Lack of content in the first and second games updates can be justified to some extent due to some reasons, so in the next updates, I will raise the rating by increasing the content of each update because it deserves it

What you said about darkness: I don't want the game to be dark. I'm aiming for a mixture of funny and casual storytelling, nothing too deep. Maybe that will change in possible future games but for now I wanna keep it simple.

Fun story can also be as enjoyable as Dark story
I am also interested in fun stories as long as there is tension
What I mean by review is highlighting the wrongness of incest on the part of sister and other characters, this makes the logic of the game higher and we sink more into the phase of incest and its special thirst.