VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Daily Life: Blacked [Teaser Demo] [SayWhatCreations]

I have to say I am on the fence with this one. The story is good, the renders and scenery are great, I love the characters... visually, conceptually is a different matter. I am liking Ray, the writing is great for his character, it's really human and believable, I can find myself relating to him, the narration is also good, my issue is with Amy.

She is like an actress from a cheap, sleazy secretary porn movie. She started out great, then she had that ridiculous fantasy (which I can let slide because it was a fantasy albeit over-the-top) and then after that, her overtly sexual innuendos really killed her character for me. Even MC's wife, while being flirtatious with other men was still a believable character.

Because of that I will give this game a three star, the writing started off great, I like the male lead, but I think what is making this just another cheap porn game as opposed to a 5 star visual novel is the Amy character, I hope the dev can tone down the parody-esque overly-sexual narration when it come to her, and really give us a believable story

Good Points
+ The game looks interesting and promising. With some changes could be a good game.
+ Some characters like BOSS look hot.

Bad Points
- Sex scenes don't have animations.
- The story is unoriginal and not that either interesting.
- Renders looks decent. Not good or not bad, but they need to improve.
- The game needs a more detailed plot, story, and more content.
- Most of the characters look unattractive, this game needs more female characters like BOSS.
- It's abandoned, at least for now.

For The End
DEV says he will come back to this game one day, so might be a chance for this game to get a remake, I hope he will make a remake and fix the bad points I stated and improve the game, otherwise it will be a poor game like before.