VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Damaged Goods [Day 2 Part 2] [Yihman1 -Sinappeal]

Before starting the review, know that I read and did everything I could to do in this novel during the current version (containing only the day 1)

So ... My final impressions were the best possible, the game executed the proposal that it was willing to make, the arts are beautiful and I just had a bug throughout it that was there near the end where there is a scene that the developer forgot to put an image, but nothing that would harm his experience with Novel ... This novel is nothing innovative, but performs well the resources they use.

Below are the scores for each category that I consider relevant in games, where the maximum score is 10.

History = 10
Plot = 9.5
Character development = 10
Graphics = 10

Verdict: It is worth taking a quick read, this is one of those novels that will be even better in the future.

I liked the game very much. Great is that you don't need to make a whore out of the heroine. Fine art. Excellent dialogues. Really liked the absence of huge boobs and implausible forms.
There is no way to support on Patreon. Sell the game on Steam, I will definitely buy it!
I'm already looking forward to continuing.

Now this is what i called DIAMOND IN THE ROUGH

Pros :

• The story have so much potential, and it will branches off nicely after what you decided on day 1. It seems like you could do everything in this VN and a lot of path to explore and that is fan-fucking-tastic.
• The girls are beautiful and pretty. overall, characters are a job well done!
• The scenes are animated!! love it
• The background, the environment, etc looks great

I had a great time playing it even tho it is still early, everything about this VN is unbelievable

This VN has so much potential, if the dev could keep this up i could see this VN will be big on F95!

DEFINITELY HAVE TO GIVE THIS ONE A RIDE!~

Well what can I say from what has already been said so far in the reviews?

A fantastic first release, the renders are fantastic, also I am enjoying the story so far.

Plenty of choices to make, and I liked them all.

Keep up the great work and I look forward to future releases

Awesome graphics - more animations would be great, when it comes to the "most viewed moments". A very interessting main character and a lot of paths with an ideal walkthrough mode .. want to see the next day soon. Could be the next big game here..

Great 3D artwork and an enjoyable story with lots of options, plus its nice to have a female lead as well. I hope the wait for part two isnt too long and I recommend you give it a try if you are thinking about it. You can tell alot of hard work has go into this

Excellent start with Hipster Ariel, er Rose.

Renders are high quality with an impressive amount of content for first release. The game has a polished style and looks like it could be a great game over time.

The writing is ambitious if a bit off. Rose is a bit of a blank slate, and decisions can change her demeanor completely for the next scene. Made some good scenes though so it's good for the porn aspect of the game.

My main concern is the branching may be too ambitious to explore the various choices. But so far the game is off to a great start.

Edit: After the second update, lowering the score a little. The writing and dialogue continue to be a bit strange. It's a bit difficult to follow what's happening and why.

Blown away by the main menu and the user interface. Looks incredibly clean and professional right off the bat.

The introduction, although sometimes cliched, was actually well scripted and gave me a few good laughs here and there. I also appreciated the in depth backstory explanations given instead of a general description of the personality

Overall renders are superb and Rose might actually be one of my favorite models in the games that I've played. I'm just a sucker for that side curled hairstyle and the face looks very smooth/appealing

The amount of options and paths that seem to be available and will be available also provide a decent amount of anticipation and intrigue for what will come next. I'm definitely staying tuned for what comes next

I loved the first chapter, the story is and explanation was really good. Characters are well done and i really enjoy to play female characters! Plus i think it is genially to make peoples choose to enable transgender. I look forward to play the next chapter!!

WOW! First release and such an extensive protfolio! This is great devs.

I was very happy to play your game. Here is my feedback to you.

First of all Arts:
The renders are really good. You guys are just starting out and probably don't have a power render rig yet. Still, overall you have made wonderful renders. The closeups of the women are very very nice!
Also the details with Thurnberg ring, the fingernails are well done, too. Overall, I like your characters extremely!
Especially the mix of small, adult and milf!
I love the animations! I really enjoyed them.
Congratulations to the artist! For the first release, this is on a very high level and I am very excited about what is still to come.
Worthy of improvement are complex scenes and their exposure. Just look to use less headlamp and switch to a 3 point exposure. And increase the render iteration in some places.
Anyway, I know that you are still at the beginning and for a good RenderRig there has to be support.
You definitely have mine, with such sexy renders.

So now to the story. Good job Writer! Your language is on a very high level. At the same time very refreshing and humorous. I have rarely seen anyone write at such a linguistic level here. Keep up the good work!
You were able to present several different storylines already in Day1.
And really accommodate a lot of variables. That's insanely good! But don't underestimate the amount of work in later updates. It will be immense! So make a good plan.
The code is good, but not perfect yet. Try to streamline and simplify it. I want to save you from a burnout.

SFX and songs
You even managed to implement that! As new devs... GREAT JOB
In the future a little less is more and as soon as the support is there you will have customized songs for sure.

FanArt Gallery
This is a real masterpiece. Everybody has a Scene Gallery. But FanArt in a game... This is new, you are NEW and this is cool!

I give you 4.5 out of 5 stars.

Best of luck for the future!

Now this is something else! I've never seen writing like this in another AVN, it felt like reading a classic novel. But it goes beyond just style: the writer uses the richness of language to portray the characters' feelings in depth.
And deep the story goes. It dives into the human soul, questions the nature of our morality and gets meta as hell sometimes. I confess I am a horny dog, the lewdness is what drives me to these VNs, and yet I couldn't help but drink and savor every sentence.
Now about the lewd stuff. Renders, models, poses, animation, lighting, everything is of high quality. There are few scenes in the release version but the potential is huge: straight/lesbian sex, trans, threesome, NTR, cheating, milf, sub/dom... All of that with no disregard to building emotional connections between characters.
This one is for those who like to invest themselves and explore multiple paths and feel the weight of their choices. With good porn to boot.