Others Damn That's Felicia? [v0.10A] [Trriggered Bakery]

[bruce9324]

Hello! to answer your question yes it is a bug, it is fixed, I think that in this website it's using the first version of the game, I'd like to fix it right now but I have to get to work soon, I'm sorry!

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here's a link to the itch.io version that should work, however if you don't want to do that no worries when I get back from work I'll fix it right away
as for the story I am really glad you like it, I am not that good at coding and I had someone help me with that, I am currently trying to improve the game UI and mechanics along with a rebooted version of the story I know people will enjoy, I am just limited by my coding so I have to do with what I am given(by myself) that's why it's currently in demo

I'm in no hurry for you to fix it I can wait and about the story I can't wait to watch how continue <3

 

[Daxflame]

Pretty neat. Any idea when this will be finished?

 

[Soul_Devour]

it's avoidable in the sense of "is she really in class"? if that make sense, I know some people like that kind of stuff (me included) so I'd like to include, I have something close in chapter 2 but it's not exactly what I envision, I know what target audience I am reaching for and I wouldn't want to include something out of every kind otherwise this game would be a bloated with things no one would enjoy

I just finished playing your demo myself, and I was confused about why the story was going the way it was, so I decided to look through the comments and see what other people would say and I'll be honest the comments have made me more intrigued in the game than the demo itself. I think this game has potential. It has a hot female LI and seems to get into the NTR pretty fast. Depending on what route you go down, there's some mystery, which could be played around to keep the player guessing if something was happening in the background with cheating if fiddled with right.

So I could see this being a pretty interesting game. I don't know how invested I'd be in this as an NTR game overall though since there hasn't been any bond building between the MC (player) and LI for me to feel like she'd flare up that jealousy factor, you know? I think adding a non-NTR route is a great idea, but maybe make things hybrid as well, where you could potentially switch things over to an NTR route if you wanted to, or by accident if you made a wrong choice, making players have to go back if they wanted to "fix" things.

Sorry for this long-winded message, as I'm shooting out ideas knowing that you're in the technical aspect at the moment, trying to get the program to work how you want. I just want to say, keep up the great work, and I hope you don't give up and fulfill your passion for making this story with Felicia! I can't wait to see your work in the future! Also, if possible it'd be nice in the future to add a separate CG folder, just to view the art itself separately. I wanted to do that but forgot the game was being made solely through a .exe file.

 

[H3im3ng]

I like NTR stories with nuance. Instead of a braindead cuck who believes everything his girl tells him, someone naturally suspicious is more real. Instead of a completely spineless cuck, someone who is enraged is far more real.

Its stories like those that can rip your heart out, because the people portrayed in them showcase realistic human behavior - REALISM. MAKES. THE. BEST. NTR. - a good example is 'Hero Party Must Fall', that game has a lot of nuance to it. If Erin, (the cuck in that game) catches you with his girls, he will 100% kill you - and it makes stealing the girls from him all the more satisfying.

Just once - Just fucking once do i want a game where the cuck isnt spineless and seeks revenge. But apparently, thats one of the unbreakable rules of NTR that the cuck can never fight back...

《HPMF》favorite too
But you need to consider and balance Is your game just a porn game that gets consumed quickly or is it a classic that deserves to be enjoyed over and over again. This is a big challenge for programming, art and copywriting.
I'm not in a position to ask much of you as a free player. I just hope you find the right path for this game and stick to it. Thank you so much.

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

I'm in no hurry for you to fix it I can wait and about the story I can't wait to watch how continue <3

thank you I hope I can make the demo timeline enjoyable for you!

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

《HPMF》favorite too
But you need to consider and balance Is your game just a porn game that gets consumed quickly or is it a classic that deserves to be enjoyed over and over again. This is a big challenge for programming, art and copywriting.
I'm not in a position to ask much of you as a free player. I just hope you find the right path for this game and stick to it. Thank you so much.

thanks man I really appreciate it but even though it's a porn game I still believe some kind of art can be put into it I'll do my best to make this great for everyone

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

I just finished playing your demo myself, and I was confused about why the story was going the way it is, so I decided to look through the comments and see what other people would say and I'll be honest the comments have made me more intrigued in the game than the demo itself, I'll be honest. I think this game has potential. It has a hot female LI and seems to get into the NTR pretty fast. Depending on what route you go down, there's some mystery, which could be played around to keep the player guessing if something was happening in the background with cheating if fiddled with right.

So I could see this being a pretty interesting game. I don't know how invested I'd be in this as an NTR game overall though since there hasn't been any bond building between the MC (player) and LI for me to feel like she'd flare up that jealousy factor, you know? I think adding a non-NTR route is a great idea, but maybe make things hybrid as well, where you could potentially switch things over to an NTR route if you wanted to, or by accident if you made a wrong choice, making players have to go back if they wanted to "fix" things.

Sorry for this long-winded message, as I'm shooting out ideas knowing that you're in the technical aspect at the moment, trying to get the program to work how you want. I just want to say, keep up the great work, and I hope you don't give up and fulfill your passion for making this story with Felicia! I can't wait to see your work in the future! Also, if possible it'd be nice in the future to add a separate CG folder, just to view the art itself separately if possible. I wanted to do that but forgot the game was being made solely through a .exe file.

WOW i really appreciate long comments like this, i really enjoy reading them as they help me remember that people care about it, what you said is a pretty good idea of what I have in mind, it's a bit ambitious but I played a lot of text reading adventure game's when all I had was a phone, I'd like to try to replicate something like that, it's ambitious but I think I have a decent chance of pulling it off, and just a hint for things that are coming up, the guy in the home screen is stopping you from entering the gallery

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

Pretty neat. Any idea when this will be finished?

I'm not sure but hopefully as soon as I can get a proper phone system working as the game

 

[e___]

I ran this on Virustotal and it caught something.

 

[ital]

modern developers like to annoy the player, I have to constantly scroll down the chat after each choice, why do that?

 

[The Revenant]

Ok, so I played the game. These are my opinion and if possible you can apply these suggestions if you want. I'll do my best to make it constructive. Do not take this as anything else but a way to help you improve the game and don't take it the wrong way if it may appear so anywhere in my suggestions:
1. The Phone UI feels a bit weird. I understand the pixelated icons but it bothers me when trying to select it. It just feels blurry or maybe it is just me.
2. As some of the people here said, scrolling to the bottom is such a pain. When a new message comes make the text scroll down to the latest message automatically. This to me was the biggest bother functionally speaking.
3. In case of the ntr. There is absolutely no build up, maybe coz it is a demo, but please if possible the better the build up the better the pleasure in playing.
4. Is it possible for the MC to not be cuck? Maybe you have some other routes? He could be into sharing but can be bull himself too. But it is your choice and your game
5. Unless this is the way it starts, is it possible to see the start of the corruption of Felicia? Any plans regarding that?
6. I believe both the characters need a character build up. So it will be better to add lots of build up chats for the audience to get to grow fond of/accustomed to/affection for the characters first. It maybe that it is a demo which is the reason for the lack of character building.
7. Maybe you can improve on the dialogues a bit? A bit more authentic or realistic answers, like how any bf would feel when their gf drops a bomb like that so casually which is a bit weird too from what I think

That's what came to my mind so far. If I get more suggestions I'll gladly let you know if you are up for it. Nonetheless, great character design with AI. The texts are easy to read with good enough flow. Best of luck Trriggered Bakery . Game on.

 

[Feru452ax]

Ok, so I played the game. These are my opinion and if possible you can apply these suggestions if you want. I'll do my best to make it constructive. Do not take this as anything else but a way to help you improve the game and don't take it the wrong way if it may appear so anywhere in my suggestions:
1. The Phone UI feels a bit weird. I understand the pixelated icons but it bothers me when trying to select it. It just feels blurry or maybe it is just me.
2. As some of the people here said, scrolling to the bottom is such a pain. When a new message comes make the text scroll down to the latest message automatically. This to me was the biggest bother functionally speaking.
3. In case of the ntr. There is absolutely no build up, maybe coz it is a demo, but please if possible the better the build up the better the pleasure in playing.
4. Is it possible for the MC to not be cuck? Maybe you have some other routes? He could be into sharing but can be bull himself too. But it is your choice and your game
5. Unless this is the way it starts, is it possible to see the start of the corruption of Felicia? Any plans regarding that?
6. I believe both the characters need a character build up. So it will be better to add lots of build up chats for the audience to get to grow fond of/accustomed to/affection for the characters first. It maybe that it is a demo which is the reason for the lack of character building.
7. Maybe you can improve on the dialogues a bit? A bit more authentic or realistic answers, like how any bf would feel when their gf drops a bomb like that so casually which is a bit weird too from what I think

That's what came to my mind so far. If I get more suggestions I'll gladly let you know if you are up for it. Nonetheless, great character design with AI. The texts are easy to read with good enough flow. Best of luck Trriggered Bakery . Game on.

I enjoyed the girl from the game, so i'm all up for a route without the cuck/humiliation route.

 

[NeZKyMaN]

I like project of the main character, let's see where it goes ;-)

 

[Heranwen]

I like her design and the art style, even if it's AI. Hope to see this project continuing.

 

[bruce9324]

I almost forgot to comment, if you will add pregnancy to the game, please make pregnancy scenes not only a pregnancy end. For example I love NTRMAN games and mangas but he never make pregnacy scenes or if he add pregancy in his works almost never make pregnancy scenes, only ends and I prefer scenes and I'm sure I'm not the only one who prefer this type of NTR content.

 

[bob_the_builder]

Her face speaks of girl who'd I'd expect to be last one to cheat

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

I ran this on Virustotal and it caught something. View attachment 3881897

Hello! I got this too, i was looking it up online to see what the fix could be but apparently this happens on godot games when I can I am gonna find a fix for it because I don't want people think I am making a virus lol

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

modern developers like to annoy the player, I have to constantly scroll down the chat after each choice, why do that?

that was a bug and it has been fixed I was originally going to update the files on after work but uh, I can't find 0.1Ademo and I think I override it with 0.2Ademo but that's gonna release tomorrow along with some other things

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

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Her face speaks of girl who'd I'd expect to be last one to cheat

thank you!

 

[Trriggered Bakery]

Ok, so I played the game. These are my opinion and if possible you can apply these suggestions if you want. I'll do my best to make it constructive. Do not take this as anything else but a way to help you improve the game and don't take it the wrong way if it may appear so anywhere in my suggestions:
1. The Phone UI feels a bit weird. I understand the pixelated icons but it bothers me when trying to select it. It just feels blurry or maybe it is just me.
2. As some of the people here said, scrolling to the bottom is such a pain. When a new message comes make the text scroll down to the latest message automatically. This to me was the biggest bother functionally speaking.
3. In case of the ntr. There is absolutely no build up, maybe coz it is a demo, but please if possible the better the build up the better the pleasure in playing.
4. Is it possible for the MC to not be cuck? Maybe you have some other routes? He could be into sharing but can be bull himself too. But it is your choice and your game
5. Unless this is the way it starts, is it possible to see the start of the corruption of Felicia? Any plans regarding that?
6. I believe both the characters need a character build up. So it will be better to add lots of build up chats for the audience to get to grow fond of/accustomed to/affection for the characters first. It maybe that it is a demo which is the reason for the lack of character building.
7. Maybe you can improve on the dialogues a bit? A bit more authentic or realistic answers, like how any bf would feel when their gf drops a bomb like that so casually which is a bit weird too from what I think

That's what came to my mind so far. If I get more suggestions I'll gladly let you know if you are up for it. Nonetheless, great character design with AI. The texts are easy to read with good enough flow. Best of luck Trriggered Bakery . Game on.

1. Sorry about that I am aware some things still look fuzzy I had someone help me and he didn't give me the best documentation but I am fixing everything best I can
2. that has been fixed it's just that I don't have the fixed version on my pc or my drive (i override it) but tomorrows update will have it all fixed
3. dont worry I do plan on having slow burn routes I just didn't want the demo timeline to have nothing and people are like 'oh ok' and never bother again, I also had to make it fast because of the scrolling issue but chapter 2 doesn't go as fast(spoilers? i hope not lol).
4.I do want to be clear that on concept ,currently want 3 main routes; oblivious,cuck, and hotwife. everything else will be sub branches of that but since they are concepts something in the future could change
5.cough cough nudge nudge
6.correct demo timeline is just to show the concept along with pictures of her (basically seeing if people like)
7.I am still getting use to the message ui so I ain't sure when things will get clipped (plus it's changing soon) sometimes I'll write in the drafts and be like "wait a minute people don't text like this" but I have a feeling my writing will improve since I tend to read and write a lot