VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Dark Breed [v0.1] [Adults city]

This looked fairly interesting so I decided to try it out.
To begin with the story was making sense, then it deteriorated. The English became less comprehensible too.
I wouldn't want to call it English, one or two correctly spelt words and bad grammar.
Yes I know I shouldn't be this hard on porn games and their English.
But it's a VN. The N stands for novel, it's supposed to be read.
Neither am I the one with a Patreon page expecting people to pay me money.
The renders were OK, some contained the notorious DAZ grain. However I didn't find any of them hot or fap material.
If you look at actual content it would probably take you longer to read this review than "reading" this VN.

Rating based on v.0.1

Version reviewed: 0.1

This is a kinetic novel about evil gods making kids and then leaving them in abusive households. The storyline is choppy and the translation is fairly rough. I couldn't get invested in any of the terrible one dimensional characters.

It's one of those stories where things just happen at random. Boom you meet a nice virgin girl on her first day as a street prostitute with no backstroy. Some thugs try to rape her because of course they do. A magical evil demon vampire shows up and knocks up the girl instead, so suddenly she's getting married to some old asshole guy 4 months later....

The whole thing is like this. Just bam-bam-bam of random things happening for no reason.

The renders are alright. The demoness is a bit of a horrorshow and the abusive guy is porn game ugly but otherwise the models look fine. There's that muddy grainy DAZ look you get from people's first efforts on that platform, but it's not too horrible.

Sex content is fairly consistent. There's no slow burn here, characters show up and go "get naked, I fuck you now" and it happens. Zero romance. There's some spanking and rape.

The game loses stars entirely for the og smash rock level storytelling. It's a kinetic novel, it needs to at least try to follow some rules of storytelling. In its current form it's more like one of those old pornographic comics where you'd get a scene with a short caption. A picture with the daughter over her father's knee and a caption saying "The daughter wanted to run away from home."