" Lady Mormont speaks harshly ... and truly"
Yes, writing English texts isn't our strongest feature, and we cannot afford prrofreading for now ( frankly, I don't know where to look for proof-reader even, I have friends who are native speaker, but I don't have guts to ask them to help with translation of adult game
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Nevertheless, I will try to rewrite intro, and cut some unnecessary lines, although I doubt it will turn into perfect English text after my efforts.