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Tyrranus

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May 4, 2017
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the writing is very primitive, like some bad 13yr old fanfiction... and I mean the writing and plot itself, not the english. The author definitely needs some help there from an english native speaker but given Im monolingual Im in no position to give anyone crap about their second language lol. The core premise is interesting and fun but it needs a TON of polish before it will be better than mediocre
 
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