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BlackDragom3636

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Jack_Zy said:
It's just fascinating how people think they wanted a better job than Daval, and then you see his ideas and it's like brother. It's really funny that people call Daval for lazy and lazy writing. And then your ideas are type. (Sex here and then sex there, but a nefarious guy arrives and passes by and then everything is resolved and they have sex again, and the end)

People really have to appreciate the good work Daval does with his stories. Not only does it set the stage, it also gives characterization to its characters, while building the world in which the story takes place. Where it also has narrative threads to reach the sex scenes and make them more enjoyable, and satisfactory. No longer just meaningless sex, as people suggest.
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In real life , I am myself a professional native lang writer ,earned about 18k dollars from my works(not a adult writer lol) and i can say that daval writing is nor bad not much good too..It just feels sometimes repetitive or sex without story but it is understandable. Much worse writer than daval exist..Except dirdog writings which is supposedly bad , daval is avg writer and sometimes good too(ID3-4,SN Alexa Liam Amanda first threesome ,MT3)..What he needs is just a nice plot which in future we may see..as current, we can't Title him as a bad writer. THERE r only 3 works..Not like 20,25 y3df works..and He is better in his genre much better than crazydad picking,himeros..
Ofcourse he is a liar..and nor trustworthy, but artworks are great, especially LANA...wooah
 
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BlackDragom3636 said:
In real life , I am myself a professional native lang writer ,earned about 18k dollars from my works(not a adult writer lol) and i can say that daval writing is nor bad not much good too..It just feels sometimes repetitive or sex without story but it is understandable. Much worse writer than daval exist..Except dirdog writings which is supposedly bad , daval is avg writer and sometimes good too(ID3-4,SN Alexa Liam Amanda first threesome ,MT3)..What he needs is just a nice plot which in future we may see..as current, we can't Title him as a bad writer. THERE r only 3 works..Not like 20,25 y3df works..and He is better in his genre much better than crazydad picking,himeros..
Ofcourse he is a liar..and nor trustworthy, but artworks are great, especially LANA...wooah
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Sure, and that's simply what I say. Daval is not a magnificent piece of writing but it is good. Many times people forget that it is a sexual story. In other words, you don't have to have the writing level of the godfather, no. I'm just saying that Daval is well written and most people who complain about his writing can't even make a draft. But just what I'm going for. Daval is good at writing. He emphasized the word (Good) maybe not the best but he does it well. But people live thinking. (Hey friend, I would do a better job writing history than Daval) And his damn ideas are something like (He has meaningless sex here, then again but in a different place, then someone else joins in and guess what happens, he got more sex, and of course then a little Ntr, and also add more characters, and then cry that they are too many characters. And do you know how the story ends? It has more sex of course.)

I'm not saying that Daval is the best written, of course not. But people keep saying that the stories are very bad or that they bore them. But then they change something in the story and get angry.

In conclusion Daval is not the best written but it is good. The problem is people who spend their time crying and complaining about anything and then if they change something they complain again. That's how stupid people are.
 
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Every screenplay should have an introduction, a plot, a climax and an ending. I am of the opinion that Daval had an idea for all three of his porn comics and how it should unfold, but that idea was not complete at the very beginning of the plot. Therefore, I have the impression that he invents some situations or parts of the plot along the way. Otherwise, all of his works are visually excellent, while textually, at least in my opinion, they are better than the vast majority of those I have had the opportunity to watch. My only major gripe or criticism regarding his work is the neglect of Alexa.
 
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To those who would like to include Sofia or Marta in a relationship with Daniel,who create an orgy. I tell them that the story, even though it is in its eighth part, still has not given all it has to the relationship between Daniel and Lana. We have not yet seen Lana being more open to Daniel through dialogues, winks in the presence of her father or friends, or a sexy dress in which she implicitly asks for him to fuck her, as well as more scenes of jealousy, or Lana getting up at night to look for Daniel, as shown in one of the covers, and perhaps the mother’s remorse towards her husband and Daniel’s attempt to win her back to him again. Finally, Daval has the final word. Please excuse me if I do not convey the idea, as the text has been translated from my original language.
 
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zorro2000 said:
no leaks, no spoiler!? I talk about id last update.
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Chill my friend , don't ask here daily for leaks..Most of them dont care..People here leak or support by their own choice where their money is spent and many of them don't like to share.We should have patience and respect for those who leak by their own timings , As what we r,Pirates..
 
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