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Donnie Brasco

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I know what your goal is, but Daval himself promises to deliver 170 pages each month for $20:
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which are 50 ID, 30 TO, and 30 SN, making a total of 110 pages plus his 60-page VIP comic, making a total of 170 pages, but he makes commissions, as you say, that he gets paid outside, and he also sells them through his alter called dirdog. If you want to justify it, I understand that's what you're here for, but if he doesn't fulfill what he promises, it's not because of an excess of work, rather it's because of an excess of wanting to earn money for less work.
What's important here is subscription. So, for 5$ you get 80 pages (ID & SN). To get MT you must pay 20$ and you get all mentioned, but only 30 pages of MT. I guess people like all of them, but most certainly there is those who maybe want MT only
 
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WOW, this is good, really, Lana. Instead of being excited, she seems to be scared or worried. ''Nice parting with the Lana of the past, who would be happy or at least wouldn't have that face.'' But why? It reminds me a bit of chapter 8, when Lana gives Alex sex for all the times she cheats on him with Daniel. Since she has a similar face.
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I think an interesting unknown is where is Daniel? He arranged to meet Lana somewhere and that's why Lana is worried. Or he's closer than she thinks.
 

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I know what your goal is, but Daval himself promises to deliver 170 pages each month for $20:
which are 50 ID, 30 TO, and 30 SN, making a total of 110 pages plus his 60-page VIP comic, making a total of 170 pages, but he makes commissions, as you say, that he gets paid outside, and he also sells them through his alter called dirdog. If you want to justify it, I understand that's what you're here for, but if he doesn't fulfill what he promises, it's not because of an excess of work, rather it's because of an excess of wanting to earn money for less work.
Im not trying to justify him or making excuses for him,im just saying that he cant deliver what he promised. I would respect if he admits that he dont have time to do what he promise. I agree that because he is too greedy he tries to do excess of work.
 

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Something I never liked about Daniel was his hair color, feels too gray sometimes, compared to his dad who has brown hair, I feel Daval should have made Daniel's hair brown or a lot more black, but keeping the style.

I hope there's an update soon because talking about hair is sad xD
 
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the way Lana is thinking she was thinking about Daniel‘s cock that’s what’s wrong with her, last time, Alex says that he was passed out drunk and just like he’s doing now, Lana's marriage is always perfect. It’s just Alex is no good for sex. all she ever think about is Daniel and that explains why she isn’t feeling a thing from Alex, I can’t wait for more pages because once Alex passed out as always, Lana will come looking for Daniel when it comes to his cock.


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Lana is, once again, trying to do something with her useless husband, she must understand that things can't go back to normal now, and if she doesn't act soon, Sofia will try to secude Daniel again, she will fail tho! maybe then Lana will understand that her son only cares about her? but if she keeps giving Daniel reasons to be jealous... it's only a matter of time before Daniel tries to make her jealous again, a taste of her own medicine.
 

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the way Lana is thinking she was thinking about Daniel‘s cock that’s what’s wrong with her, last time, Alex says that he was passed out drunk and just like he’s doing now, Lana's marriage is always perfect. It’s just Alex is no good for sex. all she ever think about is Daniel and that explains why she isn’t feeling a thing from Alex, I can’t wait for more pages because once Alex passed out as always, Lana will come looking for Daniel when it comes to his cock.


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This crossroads could serve a little more if Lana Porfi decided on Daniel, instead of denying her feelings. Although something funny to note is that she is afraid of losing Daniel to another woman, that's why she got angry when they gave her her number at the clothing store, and she felt happy when Daniel told her that he was hard for her and not for her. Sofia. Also, something to clarify is that Alex and Lana's marriage is not perfect. Since Alex is very inattentive to Lana not only in her needs but also as a couple, most of the time Alex seems to be more focused on drinking beer than on his wife, he didn't even make an effort to talk to her why he was is falling asleep, Lana seems more like a trophy wife than anything else as can be seen, since he is incapable of fighting for her. Unlike the goat, Daniel.
 

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WOW, this is good, really, Lana. Instead of being excited, she seems to be scared or worried. ''Nice parting with the Lana of the past, who would be happy or at least wouldn't have that face.'' But why? It reminds me a bit of chapter 8, when Lana gives Alex sex for all the times she cheats on him with Daniel. Since she has a similar face.
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I think an interesting unknown is where is Daniel? He arranged to meet Lana somewhere and that's why Lana is worried. Or he's closer than she thinks.
Daniel is back in his room while that scene is happening, he invited Lana to meet him there.
 

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So, just a guess, as a result of being dissatisfied with Alex's mood, Lana will go see Daniel. Because Sofia's determined to get with Daniel, Sofia will spot Lana entering Daniel's room in that bunny costume, making her even more suspicious? I hope this turns out like the end of chapter 6, where they start having sex for the rest of the chapter, and chapter 10 in its entirety can be another night of all-out sex between Daniel and Lana.
 
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Why doesn't Lana catch Sofia in Daniel's room and kick her out of the room? Out of her shame, she leaves from there, and the chapter ends with a reproach between the two parties. But I prefer it to be a night of sex between the two parties in their house in chapter 10, except if Daval wants to throw a party in the rbunny costume that Lana is wearing. excuse my english!
 

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So, just a guess, as a result of being dissatisfied with Alex's mood, Lana will go see Daniel. Because Sofia's determined to get with Daniel, Sofia will spot Lana entering Daniel's room in that bunny costume, making her even more suspicious? I hope this turns out like the end of chapter 6, where they start having sex for the rest of the chapter, and chapter 10 in its entirety can be another night of all-out sex between Daniel and Lana.
Probably Lana will see Sofia in Daniel room trying to seduce him and going on jelaous rampage.Lana waited 20 min for Alex and Sofia probably go to Daniel room as soon as Lana leaves pool.
 

8TB

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Probably Lana will see Sofia in Daniel room trying to seduce him and going on jelaous rampage.Lana waited 20 min for Alex and Sofia probably go to Daniel room as soon as Lana leaves pool.
I think that's just as plausible. And Lana can enter the room in a jealous rage and reproach, as zorro stated, the both of them for what she thinks is going on between the two of them. Sofia can exhibit some shame, while also wondering to herself the reason Lana would show up to Daniel's room in the bunny costume--making her more suspicious, while also keeping her at arm's length. Sofia can either leave in shame, or sneakily stay behind to try and listen in on the following conversation between Daniel and Lana. Daniel uses Lana's jealousy once again to seduce her. Daniel and Lana have sex again.

I like it.
 

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ID #9 | Pages 111 - 130
Ask and ye shall receive. I thought I'd put an iota of my photoshop wizardry to use and translate the most recently submitted images of Immoral Desires 9. (Lucky for you guys, I have a Spanish background.) Pages 101-103 have the original dialogue, so I didn't do much, if anything, there. Pages 106 & 107 have a couple of bubbles with the original dialogue. But the rest is translated by yours truly. I also tinkered with the colors in order to create a bit more contrast and "pop." But enough shop talk, here it is for those of you who want it.

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thanks alot for the update!!! any chance for page 110 too? update before yours just went to page 109
 
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