various generations. some cursed, some decent.
Comics Collection Pinup Daval3D Collection [2024-10-10] [Daval3D]
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Exactly! The draw to this is primarily reliant on the fact that she's his mother. What mother would state, "I wan't to be [my son's] sex pet too!" in any believable way? Not even the dialogue in pornography is this indiscreet. Some have complained about the story degrading with each passing chapter, but if you ask me, it's the dialogue hands down. Seriously, if anyone maintains contact with Daval, please act as a liaison on my behalf. I'll do the work for free; I'll work overtime; I'll do everything short of taking time off my day job. It doesn't even have to be with me, suggest him partnering with Tal3sofDebauchery or LoseKorntrol to help improve the dialogue.
It makes me wonder if he had originally included Sofia in the original draft, but had to overhaul the entire thing after the backlash. It would explain the subpar dialogue and the increasingly delayed deadlines.
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Tal3s has amazing dialogue, that guy knows how to write his shit fr. About the Sofia i‘d bet my ass that her joining in was definitely the original plan, especially after she blows him and Lana doesn’t even know about it so it doesn’t serve the whole “jealousy” arc. But i don’t think Daval changing it is the cause of delay. He doesn’t think ahead with the story, just goes with the flow and picks up from the last chapter. He rather got little lazy during holidays which is understandable.
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Also i agree that his scenes rely too much on her being the mother. We are already in the 10th chapter, everybody knows their bound, you don’t need to have Lana call Daniel “Son” every single sex scene and vice versa. It wears down. He should focus more on sex talk and their chemistry, but i can’t imagine what that be like with his delivery. “YES DANIEL POUND THIS MILF PUSSY, IM SO WET FOR YOUR STIFF DICK”
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diverse generazioni. Alcune maledette, altre buone.
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Oh my God !!!!
diverse generazioni. Alcune maledette, altre buone.
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Oh my God !!!!
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Dude give us Sarah and Uncle Peter next...
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For the dudes creating ai animations with Daval's comics pages (first of all thx you guys).It's something about the creator so i don't think it's OT but why don't you just create a separate thread for this thing and leave a lil' bit of space for the actual comic's leaks?
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Definitely, Tal3s's material are worthwhile reads. And I understand lazing-about during the holidays; if he's just going with the flow, then it's becoming a flow of something alright.
It would appear that all I've done recently is come here and complain. But I can't stress enough how vexing I find chapter 10's dialogue. With that said, it should be noted that I like the things Daval does well more than I dislike the things he doesn't do well. It's the reason I'm still here. I can't help but think that he could do better. For all the controversy Uncle Peter's inclusion in Madness Together ensued, the dialogue especially in Chapters Four and Five were above average--dare I say, good. The soft manipulation, the clear narrative build up to what would eventually happen, were some of the best stuff I've seen him do. Now it just seems like Immoral Desires is veering toward some S&M nonsense with dialogue that would make clips4sale content look like Oscar winners. But perhaps that's the dilemma put before me: (1) either accept Daval for the author he is, and consume his content at my leisure, or (2) walk away. I don't know how willing I am to keep beating this dead horse. Only time will tell...
You're right. My bad. For future will do.
Please share the link here for cross reference. Been liking your creations.
- Oct 3, 2021
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Yeah share the link, I love them and I want to see more.
Next week there will be drops. Currently at my budget. Each generation costs.