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Tal3s has amazing dialogue, that guy knows how to write his shit fr. About the Sofia i‘d bet my ass that her joining in was definitely the original plan, especially after she blows him and Lana doesn’t even know about it so it doesn’t serve the whole “jealousy” arc. But i don’t think Daval changing it is the cause of delay. He doesn’t think ahead with the story, just goes with the flow and picks up from the last chapter. He rather got little lazy during holidays which is understandable.
Definitely, Tal3s's material are worthwhile reads. And I understand lazing-about during the holidays; if he's just going with the flow, then it's becoming a flow of something alright.

Also i agree that his scenes rely too much on her being the mother. We are already in the 10th chapter, everybody knows their bound, you don’t need to have Lana call Daniel “Son” every single sex scene and vice versa. It wears down. He should focus more on sex talk and their chemistry, but i can’t imagine what that be like with his delivery. “YES DANIEL POUND THIS MILF PUSSY, IM SO WET FOR YOUR STIFF DICK”
It would appear that all I've done recently is come here and complain. But I can't stress enough how vexing I find chapter 10's dialogue. With that said, it should be noted that I like the things Daval does well more than I dislike the things he doesn't do well. It's the reason I'm still here. I can't help but think that he could do better. For all the controversy Uncle Peter's inclusion in Madness Together ensued, the dialogue especially in Chapters Four and Five were above average--dare I say, good. The soft manipulation, the clear narrative build up to what would eventually happen, were some of the best stuff I've seen him do. Now it just seems like Immoral Desires is veering toward some S&M nonsense with dialogue that would make clips4sale content look like Oscar winners. But perhaps that's the dilemma put before me: (1) either accept Daval for the author he is, and consume his content at my leisure, or (2) walk away. I don't know how willing I am to keep beating this dead horse. Only time will tell...
 

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Look at those milkers! Lana is clearly the top 1 milf, just wish she looked a bit older, maybe David's mother will have an even milfier design.
 

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So I've finally redone my list, ranking Daval's female characters on the basis of their attractiveness. No DirDogma characters were included. Some rankings were moved around, and there are some additions to the list as well. So, here it is:

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8TB's Now Antiquated Rankings of Daval's Most Attractive Female Characters
 

Mekalam

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So I've finally redone my list, ranking Daval's female characters on the basis of their attractiveness. No DirDogma characters were included. Some rankings were moved around, and there are some additions to the list as well. So, here it is:

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All scrutiny is welcome. And if you didn't participate last time in ranking your favorite Daval female characters, feel free to join in now (again, you don't have to post pictures like I did, but you can if you want.) Lastly, just for reference, here's a link to my previous list:

8TB's Now Antiquated Rankings of Daval's Most Attractive Female Characters
Interesting list but i know its your choices but sylvia must at least in top 5 easily maybe top 3 in my opinion..being last one is criminal..for me Sarah is first Lana 2..and i dont see any of DirDogma comics..are they milf hotter than daval works?i m curiously want to know..some kond of comparison.
 
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Interesting list but i know its your choices but sylvia must at least in top 5 easily maybe top 3 in my opinion..being last one is criminal..for me Sarah is first Lana 2..and i dont see any of DirDogma comics..are they milf hotter than daval works?i m curiously want to know..some kond of comparison.
Silvia's appeal, in my opinion, is in her gargantuan sized breasts. But an overwhelming majority of Daval's female characters have exorbitantly large breasts. If breasts aren't a distinguishing factor, what does Silvia have left? In my opinion, her design isn't prettier than any of the characters in the top nine. She just doesn't do it for me.

As for Daval's work under DirDogma, we're not allowed to discuss it here. My statement was more for the benefit of the mods who may see, so they don't have to sift through the entire content of my post. But as a veiled answer to your question, a couple of those female characters, based on their design, can crack my list.
 
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