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Donnie Brasco

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What makes you think other established subplots will be forgotten? Silvia helped to ease doubts about David, after some time Alice will be sucking him dry herself, i’d rather see Alice finally in action even if it’s not with David, than him and Sarah fucking in freezer.
Well, it has happened that some things have been forgotten. In MT, this is not yet the case. But, considering the amount of new content per month for all three comics plus some of his other works, and supposedly another comic is on the way, at this rate of new content coming out, I wouldn't be surprised if something else gets swept under the rug.
 

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The scene with Silvia and Alice was completely unnecessary. Waste of time and resources in creating it. Aaron caught David having sex with his mom. And I'm pretty sure Uncle Peter knows about the affair too. What should follow is blackmail, intrigue and I don't know what else. Instead, the action goes in the the usual direction as if the above did not even happen.
Wouldn't it have been better if Sylvia were switched out for Aaron? I'm assuming Sylvia was introduced for Uncle Peter, but why would she eat out a stranger? Why would Alice let a complete stranger eat her out? Even though I'm not too high on the idea of Peter's being Aaron's "svengali," that would've made more sense than Sylvia's inclusion.
 

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Wouldn't it have been better if Sylvia were switched out for Aaron? I'm assuming Sylvia was introduced for Uncle Peter, but why would she eat out a stranger? Why would Alice let a complete stranger eat her out? Even though I'm not too high on the idea of Peter's being Aaron's "svengali," that would've made more sense than Sylvia's inclusion.
You read my thoughts. It crossed my mind too. There is sex or eating or whatever you can call it. You came in toilet, hear someone moaning and decide to join in. And Alice accept it even she absolutely doesn't know who she is. And all this happens after nothing happens to her for six chapters except wet dreams once.
 

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Ask and ye shall receive. I thought I'd put an iota of my photoshop wizardry to use and translate the most recently submitted images of Immoral Desires 9. (Lucky for you guys, I have a Spanish background.) Pages 101-103 have the original dialogue, so I didn't do much, if anything, there. Pages 106 & 107 have a couple of bubbles with the original dialogue. But the rest is translated by yours truly. I also tinkered with the colors in order to create a bit more contrast and "pop." But enough shop talk, here it is for those of you who want it.

Pages 101-109:
 
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News from Daval about ID update
tomorrow guys, I'm not feeling inspired tonight, I've only done 6 pages and the text but creating a lot of little scenes where sofia gets more and more suspicious of lana and daniel tonight is difficult for me. i hope tomorrow to upload the update at noon like today with TO.

I know how to finish this chapter but the way to get there is being difficult for me. after this chapter ID will change a bit.
 

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News from Daval about ID update
tomorrow guys, I'm not feeling inspired tonight, I've only done 6 pages and the text but creating a lot of little scenes where sofia gets more and more suspicious of lana and daniel tonight is difficult for me. i hope tomorrow to upload the update at noon like today with TO.

I know how to finish this chapter but the way to get there is being difficult for me. after this chapter ID will change a bit.
This is getting good brothers. Daval is in the line of fire here many things are decided oh he can give a similar closure to part 6 and a beginning similar to part 7 with a scene between Daniel and Lana or he can play with game and do something similar to SN, which based on facts it didn't turn out very well and that's why TH and ID pass him by very often. But we'll see what happens.
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