Just a small observation, the horse's back foot is in the rock. Otherwise awesome render!
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That background photo looks familiar. I may have been there myself and taken a similar photo of the location.
why does the guy look like he's barely out of diapers again? Whats wrong with a more manly look?Characters of my upcoming VN (MC and one of the "roommates"). Figured I'd share
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I started with Daz a couple of days back. Can I get some critique on these renders please?
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The wall behind is a simple primitive ?
Maybe you should add more light to your characters
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We will watch your career with great interest!Characters of my upcoming VN (MC and one of the "roommates"). Figured I'd share
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Only problems I see in the first render is that Beefcake's head isn't resting on his hand, though it looks like it's supposed to. (Unless he's giving some kind of hand gesture in Beefcake language... I wouldn't know!) Also the couch is floating a few inches off the floor.
Couple of things on the second render: girls' hands are clipping through their legs/clothes, and need a bit of repositioning. It looks like their feet aren't touching the ground (judging by the reflections), and one of Beefcake's feet might be clipping through the ground (but I really wouldn't notice this if I weren't looking for it). Also, girl on the right's hair could be adjusted a bit so it dangles downwards with gravity rather than off to the side.
All this is minor stuff you'll get better at spotting with practice, so don't get discouraged! The only really obvious thing is, in the 2nd render, the clothing hasn't been simulated with dForce. Look up some tutorials on how to do this, since it can be a bit tricky.
(These are very good for just starting out! And on a positive note, the lighting is good, which is something lots of people struggle with.)
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Made a futa alien who disguises herself as a human
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It's by no means a negative thing.
It's just the overall vibe.
The kind of attitude she portrays, the youthful look she has, that tanned skin. She may not really look very similar but it still is the first thing that struck me.
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Another Clothswap
Ada Wong (RE Series) as Samus Aran (Metroid Series)
Aloy (Horizon Zero Down) as Ellie (LoU)
Excella (RE6) as Quiet (MGS5)
Miranda Lawson (Mass Effect) as Batgirl
Rikku (FFX-2) as Padme (SW: Episode 2)
Ada Wong (RE Series) as Samus Aran (Metroid Series)
Aloy (Horizon Zero Down) as Ellie (LoU)
Excella (RE6) as Quiet (MGS5)
Miranda Lawson (Mass Effect) as Batgirl
Rikku (FFX-2) as Padme (SW: Episode 2)
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I just wanted to test out the Orc HD character and then the meme nation attacked.
Wow, she looks great. Could you please post a fullbody render, soon? I would like to see her proportions. And one questions: Are you really plan a roommate who is smaller than the MC in the body size?Characters of my upcoming VN (MC and one of the "roommates"). Figured I'd share
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She is exquisit !Characters of my upcoming VN (MC and one of the "roommates"). Figured I'd share
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Edit:
I corrected these characters according to the post below this one by the all wise Willibrord. I apologize and as a way to not let anyone feel left out, I give you a manly man's man as the MC. Enjoy...
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Looks like meats back on the menu, boys!I just wanted to test out the Orc HD character and then the meme nation attacked.
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- LOTR, Two Towers