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some crossover of NPC's Claire(MOH) and Sofia (Mom and wife) being added to BBS the graphic novel. Credit to the original artist of these characters. Any tips and suggestions are welcome..
Nice work! though I am not an expert, you can use this advice how you wish.
The police officers pose looks off or was forgotten and she seems to be going to the wrong door to drive, always double check your character poses (including expressions) before you start your renders, things may change or may not work once everything is in place (lighting, props, other characters etc).
The render feels bigger than it needs to be to me, most of the right side I feel could be cut out or zoomed a little closer to the 2 characters in the shot. I guess take some time to think about what you would like convey in your render, maybe try some high angle shots or low ones.
Nice work again and I look forward to seeing your next work.