3D-Daz Daz3d Art - Show Us Your DazSkill

5.00 star(s) 12 Votes

DiosDecay

Member
Mar 2, 2018
282
1,661
This is the redo of the scene, that fried my old rig in the first place.
I tweaked some things I knew my old system couldn't handle anyway.
Constructive critique is always welcome. I think I've gone a little bit overboard with the sweat and the skin irritation on her groin. Also, I think I will try a stronger normal map for her lips next time.

Guess she had smth else in mind when I mentioned 'Pet Play'
View attachment 1771258

Lovely work, I'm unfamiliar with the older version of this scene if you had posted it, so I may mention things that you had removed etc.

Since the scene has a yellow/brown looking theme, the blue restraints on her wrists can draw attention away from the action, I would suggest changing them to a white or light grey, then perhaps add a blue collar to the cat to draw attention to that area.

I feel her irises are a little hidden, so maybe a lower camera angle could help show them more to bring her facial expression out a little more.

Not sure if it is dirt on her elbows and knees (forgive me), but I feel those parts are a little strong in my opinion. Also, her left foot seems to be a different texture? unless some other element is making it seem that way.

Other than those, good work as always and I look forward to seeing more from you.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Techn0magier

Evil13

Engaged Member
Jun 4, 2019
3,390
13,607
Non-porn time.
My DnD group is currently on break for a few weeks, just to let our DM recharge her batteries. The finale was very sad, one of the characters had to leave, but everyone knew that was happening. What broke them was my character announcing he was leaving right before they got on a ship and he stayed behind on the dock. He'll be coming back soon enough, I just felt like everyone was starting to see him as something of a clutch character, like "Eh, lets just aim him at XYZ and let him break it". I mean, I love that, I just want them to earn a few wins themselves. (And I have another character lined up for when we return, just for a few weeks).

And I took the opportunity to update his look.

Returns.png
 
5.00 star(s) 12 Votes