- Nov 21, 2018
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There are still some continuity errors in the script I remember a few times choosing an option in a scene only for the dialogue to imply differently.
For example, choosing to show erection to Elizabeth in the shower or choosing not to remove your shirt in the sparing match with Juliette. Elizabeth acts like you hid it from her later on for the check up, and Juliette says " you tried to kiss her" when In fact you actually do, with tongue I might add, if you choose not to remove your shirt. That stuff is annoying and really breaks the story flow.
These options dont actually set any flags or variables so the game is not keeping track of what you choose. Continuity errors are bound to happen this way.
Apart from that I am glad to see that there was a lot of work done to improve the pacing for the plot and character development. It's actually quite good IMO despite the wonky English. I enjoyed the additions, but those slips in continuity takes you out of it. Also some fade to black transition or a longer fade between scenes could give it a more polished feel. Not that there aren't any but not all of the scenes have appropriate closing transitions. Kinda weird to go from monologue in bed right into a conversation the next morning as if it was in the same sequence.
Definitely a step in the right direction overall though. Good work. Hope to see more improvement in the versions to come.
For example, choosing to show erection to Elizabeth in the shower or choosing not to remove your shirt in the sparing match with Juliette. Elizabeth acts like you hid it from her later on for the check up, and Juliette says " you tried to kiss her" when In fact you actually do, with tongue I might add, if you choose not to remove your shirt. That stuff is annoying and really breaks the story flow.
These options dont actually set any flags or variables so the game is not keeping track of what you choose. Continuity errors are bound to happen this way.
Apart from that I am glad to see that there was a lot of work done to improve the pacing for the plot and character development. It's actually quite good IMO despite the wonky English. I enjoyed the additions, but those slips in continuity takes you out of it. Also some fade to black transition or a longer fade between scenes could give it a more polished feel. Not that there aren't any but not all of the scenes have appropriate closing transitions. Kinda weird to go from monologue in bed right into a conversation the next morning as if it was in the same sequence.
Definitely a step in the right direction overall though. Good work. Hope to see more improvement in the versions to come.
