A pregnancy fetish will be added in next updates, but creampie is already in
Debatable. Boondock Saints pulled it off, although that character (bartender in the beginning) admittedly had a psych condition that involved him yelling swears (similar idea to Torret's Syndrome, although I think torret's is specifically yelling what they're focused on? Not an expert though). Haven't actually played it yet though, so can't comment on the writing in general. Edit: Writing could use some work, but isn't bad for a v0.1 from a dev who's primary language isn't English (or so I'm assuming). Looks like it's more issues with the language than issues with the writing. As for that specific line, it... kinda works, but Meor would probably be better off going with something people actually say, like 'fucking hell' or maybe 'damn it'/'dammit'.
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Saw the .txt you included about the warning in the beginning. Got a similar warning, but mentioning needing to update Direct X. What version of Direct X is needed? I know MS has free packs for certain legacy versions, so kinda figured I grab the one needed (assuming it doesn't need something weird like a specific version of 10 from halfway through it's cycle).
Keep in mind that I haven't actually played it yet, but from what I've seen from the OP here I've got a comment. First of all, make the game you want to make, mostly mentioning this in case what I'm mentioning is not a priority for you, but something you included to try to boost appeal. It looks like you've put a fair amount to effort/assets into sound. You may want to figure out how many people just plain turn off sound when playing porn games (from what I've seen it's likely over half for the games I play, but I'd also expect a lot of variance based on style, genre, and engine). Might not seem like it matters, the people who mute them can just play with it muted, but it's worth keeping in mind that many of those people will consider time/funds spent on sound to be a waste, and if you spend a lot of time on sound that may effect if they choose to support you or not (most of the people who actually support games are reasonable enough to not mind some focus on stuff they don't care about, although how much will vary person to person). If sound matters to you, absolutely keep focusing on it, game quality is almost always better if the dev is making what they want to make, and quality kinda matters the most. If you just view it as a potential draw that isn't something you're particularly passionate about though, certainly keep what you've got, but you may want to consider limiting how much focus you give it in the future. Just thoughts, consider or ignore as you feel appropriate for your game.
EDIT: Tried it out, the translation is alright for a v0.1, but you're going to either need to get a native english speaker to polish the translations, or improve your english. Couple of the big issues with it:
Glancing at the menu's and the content options, the tooltip info about disabling fetishes and the censor needs to be re-translated before the game gets to a point where it matters (doesn't really matter yet due to the lack of content). I -think- the fetish option just flags content for the censor? As for the censor, Wasn't sure if selecting it enables or disables it, and if it works for everything but won't unblur flagged fetishes, or of it only blurs flagged fetishes but you can click to unblur them.
It may also be a good idea to redo the agreement thing at the beginning (screenshot 1). First, it isn't terms and conditions, it's a disclaimer. Very different things. The 'This game has no commercial purpose. All payments the author receives are from people's own free will' line contradicts itself (no commercial purpose followed by talking about payments). I think you want something like 'This product is free, any revenue generated is from donations" ('revenue generated' is a slightly more discrete way of saying 'money made'). Keep in mind that offering rewards for supporter tiers will make the 'free' and 'donation' parts of that questionable. It's also very possible that I missed what you were going for there, but this was the only thing I could think of that made sense.
Were the two thugs intended to be a Pulp Fiction reference? Would kinda explain the unusual swearing, but I didn't notice any specific references.
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Wow-- Very interesting! But quite short intro, this is more of a sneak peak than a demo. The scene with the Blonde girl at the beginning was very hot.
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If you try the Jump: Free room, you will see the spellbook in the closet. add to your inventory and you will see that there are transformation possibilities through a "switch" spell.
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not gonna lie i see bobdilian everywhere on different forums when NTR is involved its like he wants to ruin NTR games or something anyways i like this game meorless keep it up
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This looks amazing. All of those tags and the artstyle tell me this is my kind of game. I will say though that I'm interested in seeing what the story is trying to go for the most from looking at everything in the overview.
"You will play as a high school boy whose normal life is about to get end."
Translation:
"You will play as a high school boy whose normal life is about to get ass/behind/finish." ???
Or did he mean, "... is about to end"?
Interesting though. I advise the developer to pass the text content to someone who can work a bit on it. It's Engrish/Spanglish.
BTW: What the F does "deathable" mean? It's not a real word.
Translation:
"You will play as a high school boy whose normal life is about to get ass/behind/finish." ???
Or did he mean, "... is about to end"?
Interesting though. I advise the developer to pass the text content to someone who can work a bit on it. It's Engrish/Spanglish.
BTW: What the F does "deathable" mean? It's not a real word.
I'm getting this warning. DirectX and graphics drivers are updated. Would it be safe to continue ?
Read txt file in main folder of the game - "Performance Warning.txt" it's says:
When you start the game for the first time
you may see this:
"Performance Warning"
"This computer is not using shaders..."
Click: "Continue, Don't show warning agan"
It's a common warning.
However the game has fine performance.
Tested on Intel Pentium 3558U (2x1700 Mhz), 4 GB DDR3L 1600 Mhz, NVIDIA GeForce 820M (2 GB)
It happens because of built-in image blur and the warning will be shown despite of your actual performance.
1. About H-Censor and flagged fetishes:
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2. "You're going to either need to get a native english speaker to polish the translations, or improve your english":
A: I perfectly understand it. No one can be master of everything and I'm not intend to be the one. However, I had to start at some point to make progres.
3. About the disclaimer, dialogs, text, future changes:
A: I'll keep that in mind. Right now I collecting reviews what should be changed.
HoWevEr... I have no purpose to work for a certain community. I want to find my own and make a game that I would like to play too. But I don't make the game for myself-only and I'll consider people opinion (the adequate ones). But x2 I'll not change things like: concepts / story / characters. I'll change only what's makes playthrough less comfortable (in a tech way).
4. About sound:
A: I know that many people mute porn games by default. I don't really care about it
I like making sound effect (in porn specifically). In future I even want to make an ambient sound script like the porn sound has. And I know that the people whose opinion I count - will appreciate.
5. About criticism dialogs:
A: I considering all language tips. And I would like if more people will give some good dialogues examples (and not like the "Meh, the game dialogues are garbage". I'm not offended by it, but I don't find it useful either.)
6. About episodes play-time:
A: I've been on the site for awile and I know about the "short update" meme
But v0.1 has reasons to be short. I were intended to show the game abilities and make a good setup to code better and faster.
I also focus on "auto" mode to play the game. v0.1 has some synch: image / music / sound. (The battle moment is actually should be played on: "auto" mode | middle auto-forward time | max text speed )
Conclusion: I'll consider language tips and opinion. I'll not change things like: concepts / story / characters. I'll change only what's makes playthrough less comfortable (in a tech way).
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As I already said: " The game is for people who is at least OK / Fine / don't mind such things. And not for those who hate it."
It's obviosly means: the game is not focused on NTR or rape and other "porn-offensive" tags. But the game has it, even if not too many.
Going forward, I wouldn't count the game-planned NTR as an actual hard-NTR. I wouldn't even tell that the NTR content has a huge effects on story - no, it not and can be skipped (if it's already happen in story | past). Or avoid in MC's part of the story (present).
However, if you hate even the existing ability to see a character sex with someone else - even if it's in the skippable "flashback" (that means it's been before MC story-part) - the game is obviosly not for you.
Depends what you count as NTR:
If when: someone fucks your actual girlfriend in front of you or behind your back and you did nothing for that to happen - NONE
If when: it's possible to make her cheat or see what's been before in "flashbacks" - Few
P.S. If you trying to get the exact percent number of NTR - I don't think it's wise.
I hope you can put it as optional in the setting so I can toggle off the content, and will we got some more hardcore fetish likeA pregnancy fetish will be added in next updates, but creampie is already in
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