- Sep 30, 2019
- 34
- 47
Well, it's a start. A not so bad start.
The game clearly tries to have the same feel and build as GGGB and ORS... Which I find cool, since I love those games.
The dev doesn't seem to be a native english speaker, so there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. It would be a good idea to find someone to help on that front.
Finally, it seems the dev intends to create several routes and not just the female protag one. Considering how long i takes, I would really advise to focus on the first route, otherwise I think this game won't get far.
Good luck dev anyway. I look forward to what follows.
The game clearly tries to have the same feel and build as GGGB and ORS... Which I find cool, since I love those games.
The dev doesn't seem to be a native english speaker, so there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. It would be a good idea to find someone to help on that front.
Finally, it seems the dev intends to create several routes and not just the female protag one. Considering how long i takes, I would really advise to focus on the first route, otherwise I think this game won't get far.
Good luck dev anyway. I look forward to what follows.
