- Aug 13, 2016
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Thank you RoadWulf!
Really like this Ellie girl, so I guess I will just wait for the next update.
Really like this Ellie girl, so I guess I will just wait for the next update.
See bug fix https://f95zone.to/threads/defending-lydia-collier-v0-05-31-white-phantom-games.33797/post-3573175I have just tried this game and had to stop playing for the moment.
Its not that its a bad game In fact looks like it could be a very good one.
Its not the Typo's and incorrect sentances them i can live with.
what has stoped me playing for the moment is errors and my own tiredness.
It may just be my game I dont know but i'm getting errors nearly every second scene on the Yennifer investigation when you go to question her it's an error screen you need to ignore to carry one and also the image of the woman talking is not Yennifer but Yanna.
then after the questioning it seems ok untill you get taken on the DCI Cavendish date to the restraunt where Yanna works then two more errors all involving Yanna in some way.
I'm not complaing just reporting it just incase its not just me and i will retry playing again later but I thought I should mention it atleast
Just Sayin.
thank you for that I probably would of found it had been delt with the page before but as i stated I was tired.
Could be a fun addition to use on a replay or playing different routes. From my memory it all sounds similar to the original text anyway, so give it a goBeen messing with the script a very little.
I not the best when it comes to writing English even though its my first and only langue
but would like a second apinion should I carry on and Edit the rest or leave it as is.
If I did carry on would it be of interest to other's once done or would the DEV mind and rather I didn't
I would of corse try to keep it as close to whats already there and not try to mess with the story.
Here's an example.
p "Ah another Monday morning"
P "And this will be Ellie's first ever payday"
P "I can barely remember my very first payslip"
P "Must have been about fifteen years ago"
P "And it went straight to my Mum and Dad for rent"
P "They where so proud of me"
P "Maybe I should give Ellie a little bonus just in case she's in the same scenario"
P "I can certainly afford it and she's been a perfect employee since she started"
P "Never late, extremely polite and good at what she does"
P "If only all my old assistants had been the same"
(you Give her a bonus)
P "This £100 will should let her buy something nice for herself"
P "I quite fancy a cuppa"
P "I expect she'll be here any moment-"
E "Good Morning Mr Oakwood!"
E "What do you think you are you doing!?"
E "That's my job"
E "I don't want you deciding you could replace me to easily"
E "Just go and sit down, I'll bring you one over"
p "I can make a cup of tea you know Ellie"
E "I don't doubt that for a second"
E "Now just sit down and let me do it"
p "Whatever you say Ellie"
p "Any way Ellie, how was your weekend?"
E "It was really good actually!"
E "We went to Thorpe Park with my little sister"
E "I got absolutely soaked on the wave ride but it was still great fun"
E "How was yours Mr Oakwood?"
p "Mine was so so, you don't get up to much when your my age"
E "'Your age', Oh stop it"
E "Your not even 40 and already talking like you're one day off retirement"
E "I'll start going grey just listening to you"
E "I will probably be needing a wig by Christmas just to cover up the gray hairs"
p "Haha, well it is payday so at least you will be able to afford one"
E "Oh has it been a month already?"
p "indeed it has"
E "Here's your tea Mr Oakwood"
p "Thank you Ellie"
p "And here is your payslip"
E "Wow my first one ever"
E "Mr Oakwood do I need to take this to the bank?"
p "Haha, no, thats just a print out saying what you have eared, I've already transferred the your money to your account"
p "Have a look at it, And let me know if there's anything that you don't understand"
p "Oh by the way I put a little bonus in there for you too"
p "You've had a really impressive first month and you deserve it"
p "The taxes and etcetera are all sorted"
p "Just don't spend it all at once"
E "Haha I won't"
some of it is actualy just thoughts but I put P just so you know its the PLayer.
its only the first few minutes of the game.
hope it makes sence to you all so please let me know what you think.
please for the love of god if you don't like it and think its a stupid Idea.
keep the rude comment's to a minimum
thank you.
Thanks !Updated Qleaf walkthrough by my myself! Enjoy!
Edit: Updated to v0.05.3
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