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Ren'Py Degrees of Intimacy [v0.3.1] [Mandr4goran]
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Found a minor mistake due to partial rewriting: Tuesday of the second week on the trust route, MC leaves the session saying 'Have a good evening, Mrs. Reed' instead of 'Evelyn' as in version 0.2. The next page says:'I use her first name softly...' Here it should say "last name".
Not sure the reason behind this change but unfortunately due to it, I believe the following monologues/thoughts of the MC make less sense as calling somebody by their last name isn't very intimate (I've successfully escalated the intimacy without a single physical touch).
Not sure the reason behind this change but unfortunately due to it, I believe the following monologues/thoughts of the MC make less sense as calling somebody by their last name isn't very intimate (I've successfully escalated the intimacy without a single physical touch).
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There is a scene where she takes off her panties but in the image you can see her panties in her hands and in another one she has them on.
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There a lot of scenes where she still wears a blouse and on the next scene she is only wearing her blazer.
But as it's AI CG I am glad that the dev at least made a big effort to have a consistency in their faces which is the most important aspect for me. And let's be honest, even if it's AI the scenes are very lewd.
Overall a great game and I can't wait to see where it's going.
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Can you please tell me where you encountered that bug? With one scene with blazer on and one without? From week 4 i think there shouldn't be any blazer and I reused some scenes and maybe one of those had the blazer on. Thank you for your finding.
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Thanks but for me it's absolutely fine as it is now and I would prefer for you to add more content instead waisting time to 'repair' these minor flaws.
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Well, fixing these minor issues is not taking that much time. (I'm very efficient). But with the story writing it will take some time. I post weekly updates on my patreon if you want to see them
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OK, I just played until the end of the current version, and rather then writing a review on a incomplete game (and one that I only played through once). I thought I would just share a few thoughts (and point out a few issues...maybe even put forth a question/suggestion or two).
Let's do issues first just so I don't forget to do them, and since you literally asked to hear about them.
1. Multiple times the color of the panties, and the description of them, don't match. Sometimes is says the are white when they are black, sometimes it is the other way around and/or they are describes as dark when they are not, ect.
2. In the scene where she takes her panties off, and holds them in her hand, she still appears to be wearing them (or part of them), but in the very next shot (same scene) she is not.
3. I got one Ren'Py error in one of the later weeks (once the second teacher is involved), but I don't recall exactly where (I followed the full corruption + hedonisms route if that narrows things down at all).
Ok, that is enough for "issues" let's move on.
As for sharing some thoughts I just wanted to point out a few things. I think the writing is solid, and the story is interesting enough, that I thought is was worth mentioning. The pacing feels just right, and the lack of any grind (or feeling of repeating task/events) is just so refreshing. While I think that overall the women are attractive they really are a bit to "sameish" IMO. I personally would love to see one of them with a reduction of breast size (I know this is just preference, but I had to try) for all the fans of more reasonable sized breast. As for the questions/suggestions let's just save that for another time. I didn't read the whole thread, and I don't want to ask stuff that has already been answered. Also, if we are being honest I have every intention of being back here at some point in the future.
Oh, I guess I should ask/mention a thing about the tags. Is is common practice to use the Lesbian tag for games with any girl on girl behavior (even if limited to a kiss...)? I don't really know the rules so this is more me asking then pointing out something is missing.
Anyway, good job so far, good luck with the future development of the game, and I look forward to seeing more.
Let's do issues first just so I don't forget to do them, and since you literally asked to hear about them.
1. Multiple times the color of the panties, and the description of them, don't match. Sometimes is says the are white when they are black, sometimes it is the other way around and/or they are describes as dark when they are not, ect.
2. In the scene where she takes her panties off, and holds them in her hand, she still appears to be wearing them (or part of them), but in the very next shot (same scene) she is not.
3. I got one Ren'Py error in one of the later weeks (once the second teacher is involved), but I don't recall exactly where (I followed the full corruption + hedonisms route if that narrows things down at all).
Ok, that is enough for "issues" let's move on.
As for sharing some thoughts I just wanted to point out a few things. I think the writing is solid, and the story is interesting enough, that I thought is was worth mentioning. The pacing feels just right, and the lack of any grind (or feeling of repeating task/events) is just so refreshing. While I think that overall the women are attractive they really are a bit to "sameish" IMO. I personally would love to see one of them with a reduction of breast size (I know this is just preference, but I had to try) for all the fans of more reasonable sized breast. As for the questions/suggestions let's just save that for another time. I didn't read the whole thread, and I don't want to ask stuff that has already been answered. Also, if we are being honest I have every intention of being back here at some point in the future.
Oh, I guess I should ask/mention a thing about the tags. Is is common practice to use the Lesbian tag for games with any girl on girl behavior (even if limited to a kiss...)? I don't really know the rules so this is more me asking then pointing out something is missing.
Anyway, good job so far, good luck with the future development of the game, and I look forward to seeing more.
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I don't really know. I've seen a lot of games with AI art, but you have to try them yourself. I'm not a fan of those, but you may like them.
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Thank you so much for all of these. You see, there are a lot of things to test and people pointed out some bugs or mistakes, but the ones that you've found nobody pointed them out before. So thanks for that and I'll try to fix them for the future.OK, I just played until the end of the current version, and rather then writing a review on a incomplete game (and one that I only played through once). I thought I would just share a few thoughts (and point out a few issues...maybe even put forth a question/suggestion or two).
Let's do issues first just so I don't forget to do them, and since you literally asked to hear about them.
1. Multiple times the color of the panties, and the description of them, don't match. Sometimes is says the are white when they are black, sometimes it is the other way around and/or they are describes as dark when they are not, ect.
2. In the scene where she takes her panties off, and holds them in her hand, she still appears to be wearing them (or part of them), but in the very next shot (same scene) she is not.
3. I got one Ren'Py error in one of the later weeks (once the second teacher is involved), but I don't recall exactly where (I followed the full corruption + hedonisms route if that narrows things down at all).
Ok, that is enough for "issues" let's move on.
As for sharing some thoughts I just wanted to point out a few things. I think the writing is solid, and the story is interesting enough, that I thought is was worth mentioning. The pacing feels just right, and the lack of any grind (or feeling of repeating task/events) is just so refreshing. While I think that overall the women are attractive they really are a bit to "sameish" IMO. I personally would love to see one of them with a reduction of breast size (I know this is just preference, but I had to try) for all the fans of more reasonable sized breast. As for the questions/suggestions let's just save that for another time. I didn't read the whole thread, and I don't want to ask stuff that has already been answered. Also, if we are being honest I have every intention of being back here at some point in the future.
Oh, I guess I should ask/mention a thing about the tags. Is is common practice to use the Lesbian tag for games with any girl on girl behavior (even if limited to a kiss...)? I don't really know the rules so this is more me asking then pointing out something is missing.
Anyway, good job so far, good luck with the future development of the game, and I look forward to seeing more.
I will add another female character and I will try to make her more different as you said. With that being said, thank you for your review and I hope you'll keep close in order to see more.