Ren'Py Demi-Human [v0.05a] [King Sleepy]

[King Sleepy]

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[King Sleepy]

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[Koushiro]

The art looks really great and the game seems interesting. Before I get too attached, I noticed that harem wasn't listed in the planned tags, but multiple endings were. If you don't mind answering, will any of these endings allow you to stay with all of the girls or will we be forced to choose by the end?

 

[elbo911]

Guess i can give you guys a sneak peek at the mother's new Bust

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While it doesn't look bad per se, the discrepancy between the bust pic and her in-scene appearance (compare below) is rather off-putting to me.

EDIT: And I don't mean just the different hairstyle, the art style looks inconsistent to me, as if it's either two different persons or the same person drawn by two different artists with different styles.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

IIRC I believe there are in fact 2 different artists (one doing the sprites/CGs, one doing the portraits.)

 

[draggon1]

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HAVE GOBLIN GIRLS.

 

[str8up]

WOOT no gay or futa im in !!!!!!!

 

[King Sleepy]

While it doesn't look bad per se, the discrepancy between the bust pic and her in-scene appearance (compare below) is rather off-putting to me.

EDIT: And I don't mean just the different hairstyle, the art style looks inconsistent to me, as if it's either two different persons or the same person drawn by two different artists with different styles.

Yeah i get where you are coming from i tired hard to make the busts higher quality than the sprites cause it takes forever to make the bust, but the mom is a clear example of where i need to change up what i'm doing, and make more clear indicators that THAT is her, like, the hoop earrings and the hair looking more like hers.

It's just me making all of this, so I'll address these issues in 0.3b so please keep em' coming. There will be some inconsistencies in my early work im still trying to get my style and workflow down. It's going to flip-flop a lot as i try new things!

 

[King Sleepy]

The art looks really great and the game seems interesting. Before I get too attached, I noticed that harem wasn't listed in the planned tags, but multiple endings were. If you don't mind answering, will any of these endings allow you to stay with all of the girls or will we be forced to choose by the end?

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE HAVE GOBLIN GIRLS.

I'm going to have some girls be okay with sharing while others are not but there will be multiple endings some with Harem-ish vibes

for instance i will be adding a goblin girl who is by nature poly

 

[King Sleepy]

good thing I had the hair on separate layer

 

[Kuhuja]

Story is really well crafted and writing is fun to read. But i have noticed that as a reader, i can read a lot more "story building" filler text when i use half of my brain capacity to "admire her beauty". For this reason, "rough, early-stage design" pictures do make me confused if i wanna see anything more about that character. Or even care what she is talking.

I’d rather have few consistently great-looking pictures of a character, than see wildly different versions of the same character. I just lost all the interest on the orc lady or what she was even saying, because i had no idea what kind of "raw sketch" looking cartoon monster she is in the next picture.

But the story and writing were so good that I wanted to give it a thumbs up and share my opinion.

 

[King Sleepy]

Story is really well crafted and writing is fun to read. But i have noticed that as a reader, i can read a lot more "story building" filler text when i use half of my brain capacity to "admire her beauty". For this reason, "rough, early-stage design" pictures do make me confused if i wanna see anything more about that character. Or even care what she is talking.

I’d rather have few consistently great-looking pictures of a character, than see wildly different versions of the same character. I just lost all the interest on the orc lady or what she was even saying, because i had no idea what kind of "raw sketch" looking cartoon monster she is in the next picture.

But the story and writing were so good that I wanted to give it a thumbs up and share my opinion.

I appreciate the honesty and will strive to be more consistent with my art style.

it just difficult being new to this and I feel like my art has gotten better from day 1 to 3 as I am able to make the base sprites better I will go back and update old ones. Im planning to make a this a moderately long game.

so thank you all for joining me on this journey.

0.3b is going to be a base improvement of the sprites to meet a standard consistency.

 

[AssaultGoblin]

Android port?

 

[King Sleepy]

Alright i've heard your complaints, some of them being a tad harsh .
But yeah I give you the new day 2 Kalla.
Now more in line with her day 3 appearance.

I"ll spend update Ver 0.3b updating the rest of the sprites for the main girls.

If you want to see more sneak peeks like this along with more input on the appearance of the rest consider joining the discord.
and supporting on patreon or subscribstar.

 

[draggon1]

i have to say, i dont like te current portrait of willow, that nose dont fit me right, i prefer the first version where she have muzzle.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

i have to say, i dont like te current portrait of willow, that nose dont fit me right, i prefer the first version where she have muzzle.

I agree with that too, though while I still respect the dev's decision if the muzzle was never the "true" vision of Willow, I still absolutely adore the more anthro design of her.

 

[King Sleepy]

I’ll see what I can do willow is the only character I’ve gone back and forth on a lot mostly about the nose.

That being said you both should voice these opinions in the discord I’ll even hold a poll over her nose.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

I’ll see what I can do willow is the only character I’ve gone back and forth on a lot mostly about the nose.

That being said you both should voice these opinions in the discord I’ll even hold a poll over her nose.

I'll try to do that today, but I may or may not be busy, we'll see.

 

[King Sleepy]

Another sneaky peek to updated luna!!!

 

[King Sleepy]

New Willow Bust

For the fans of her old look !​