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RPGM Demon Deals [v0.06.5a] [Breadman Games]
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cant wait for cassie to get that really good doggy you know shes gonna get a good ass doggy animation
Bread is having to ease off a little due to his shoulder injury playing him up. So no valentines stream this year, weather or not he does something as a treat for us is up in the air
Oh no! Looks like we get a classic '80s sitcom clipshow!... "Tonight...on a very special episode of 'Demon Deals'..."
Is that beginning of the famous Dr Bones arc of my something hurt and i can't keep up?
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He hurt his shoulder in Octoberish of 2023. So no, not the beginning of anything
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I have a brain that's constantly thinking forward (and back), it can't sit still. So, while I'm absorbing your story - I'm seeing "bread"crumbs leading forward (see what I did there? lawl). In general, you have paid those instincts off, foreshadowing things smartly. It's been rare where I see something building and you DON'T hit some sort of mark I'm anticipating. Which is a credit to your writing and overall plan with this project.
When it became clear they were headed back to the home he grew up in for an evening (again, he hadn't spent a night there since the game began), I felt like you might do some exposition there on their relationship, prior to him becoming the world's most purposeful cock ; ) For some reason when she walked into the room in that bathrobe (and he noticed that specific bathrobe, if I remember correctly), I'm like, 'Yup. Here comes the backstory'. And then it didn't.
Maybe that's tricky due to age concerns. Blurring the lines there. But I felt like biting into something deeper there could have really enhanced that sex scene. Not that you need get all romantic - it's a cartoon, we don't want that. But advantaging Leslie's phenomenal nurturing skills and interests... you know, milking all that out of the great big cock (which you've handled spectacularly well with her all along)... in that specific setting and scenario, there was a bullseye to hit there, imo. And ya missed it.
I wouldn't want to try and get more specific than that. It's your story to tell, mate. Not mine.
In summary: some recognition between them that he's back in his bedroom, yes. And the pleasure that might organically bring the both of them (particularly her, I would think). Both actionably, and in dialogue. Could have served the story well. Maybe even close the book on the past some and propel them forward? I dunno.
Having said that? I did really enjoy how you burst that pearl necklace of hers apart. Real nice touch there. Which kinda plays into cucking the father (and propriety), maybe? So that did serve a purpose, subconsciously.
Glad my prior post was able to earn some satisfaction for ya. Makes it all worth doing, eh?
cheers, mate
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Around version .10 (ish) for Leslie. She gets content every update but as has been explained MANY times, her route is a slow burn.
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Progress Log - 2025/02/16
Not a great week, personally or professionally. Been trying to make as much headway as I can while dealing with IRL stuff (tax season, family, etc) and pushed myself too hard - aggravated my shoulder, again, last week which greatly hindered my ability to draw anything, so only got a single animation done this week on top of cancelling the Valentine's stream.
I am prioritizing long-term wellness over short-term gains, but am also committed to continuing progress any way I can, so I'll be writing ahead a bit this week for characters we haven't seen much of yet but will be soon, like Maria, as well as dipping into coding the first events in for this update. Anything that isn't drawing right now should be okay but I'll keep everyone posted if that changes.
Good news is I finally have health insurance again and had my first doctors visit last week and am on the road for that process - got x-rays done (inconclusive but makes sense as I believe it's soft-tissue damage I'm dealing with) and have medically prescribed physical therapy coming up soon. No stream this week, but I will be back with some doodles for the Victory/Versus on Wednesday (this will either be done very simply by me or by the lovely Mrs. Bread again). Have a good week everyone.
- Breadman
Not a great week, personally or professionally. Been trying to make as much headway as I can while dealing with IRL stuff (tax season, family, etc) and pushed myself too hard - aggravated my shoulder, again, last week which greatly hindered my ability to draw anything, so only got a single animation done this week on top of cancelling the Valentine's stream.
I am prioritizing long-term wellness over short-term gains, but am also committed to continuing progress any way I can, so I'll be writing ahead a bit this week for characters we haven't seen much of yet but will be soon, like Maria, as well as dipping into coding the first events in for this update. Anything that isn't drawing right now should be okay but I'll keep everyone posted if that changes.
Good news is I finally have health insurance again and had my first doctors visit last week and am on the road for that process - got x-rays done (inconclusive but makes sense as I believe it's soft-tissue damage I'm dealing with) and have medically prescribed physical therapy coming up soon. No stream this week, but I will be back with some doodles for the Victory/Versus on Wednesday (this will either be done very simply by me or by the lovely Mrs. Bread again). Have a good week everyone.
- Breadman
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Take care of yourself. If you haven't got your health, you haven't got anything.