46n2
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Ehhh... piggybacking on an earlier mention...Got a few job options coming in this next update! I'd like to have those other locations available in the future though. Maybe there can be a special demon wine that helps nudge Leslie along a bit, too.
I very much enjoyed the way you had Leslie disappear a few glasses (subtle animation, plus an overt oops) and end up with a gigantic boner smacking off on her in v01 (or 02?). That worked, in that moment. But if you turn her into a lush with no concrete notions of her own? No bueno.
The Hospital scene worked brilliantly beCUZ she wasn't thoughtless. A little nudge, a fine excuse - and she's reasonably eager/compelled to comply. As the receiver (the viewer), we know there are things in that room beyond her control. But if you start giving her an antidote to any integrity or actions of her own? I'm not gonna admire her so much no more. And that can't happen.
You've been towing that line PERFECTLY. Don't throw overwhelming 'excuse juice' at her suddenly. She's gotta ultimately own it instead. (I would hope.)
That character is clearly the anchor to all of your efforts here. She is literally the balance within all of it. If you compromise her THAT way? It's an avalanche. (And more likely an excuse for the creator to get it where they want to. Don't do that, mate. Make it all be earned. Stay the course.)