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waffle_side

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Thanks for saving us the trouble its a shame its seen good but after seing that fuck this i dont know why is a trend now of having MC that is shiten by everyone what a bad first impression a prologue where everyone fucks more than you and you get beaten Up.
The MC will be getting a lot of action from now on, I just wanted to give him strong motivation :)
 

waffle_side

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How much of a grindfest is the Sandbox?

The kinks/fetish are going to be avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?


EDIT: The idea for the story is not bad but you sre warned.. the Mc is a loser this seems to want to be the typical 0 to hero story, but here the mc started at -100 :HideThePain:, the sex scenes are forced (of which only one is with the Mc) and all the sex scenes at the moment are rape, what's more, in the last scene the Mc is drugged by his boss, she gives him a forced footjob while they film him and in the end they beat him up.
Btw, it's missing the tags Kinetic Novel (it doesn't have a single choice, just some fights) voyeur, rape, drugs, footjob, vaginal sex, femdom.
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Thanks, good luck.
Thank you for the feedback :)
 

Chris2041

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The MC will be getting a lot of action from now on, I just wanted to give him strong motivation :)
sorry but i dont know if i want to play this like a say a good first impresion is very important and to tell you the truth after the rape and beat up scene i dont know if i want play more .... unless you can have revenge in the bitch that rape us i think i will pass for now this need the rape and female domination tag
 

L33tmaster

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After playing, there needs to be more tags...
I'm into dominant women, but not into rape and the fact you aren't even getting some is disappointing. I do enjoy the art but that's all there is. I'm optimistic, but until then I'll just let you cook and check back later.
 
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Chris2041

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The MC will be getting a lot of action from now on, I just wanted to give him strong motivation :)
Maybe Next time wait a little to MC get something before posting this versión of the Game that is gonna make the people thinks this is a humiliation femdom game where MC gets beat Up humiliated and raped specially if the Game content is not gonna Focus on that
 

Juerhullycin

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Look-see

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if you're trying to do a harem game then rule number one is never show other guys banging regardless of the reason. but aside from that yeah based on comments doesnt seem like something that will draw in the harem crowd.

maybe if its gets a remake i'll try it.
 

Kalléo

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People who write here without taking a look at the tags...
?? I'm confused. Where does the tags say "cuckold loser"? Lmao. In all honesty they really should include more tags, something like a Zero to hero tag for games like this, So I can slap it on ignore and never stumble upon it even by accident. The hilarious part is that those games never get past the loser phase haha
 

DrFree

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"More of an arc than the average harem MC" can we have an arc that doesn't put off 99% of the population?

Let me give a few suggestions to counter how bad of a first impression this is:

The boss won't be a Love Interest, more like side piece to get MC off, and won't receive any goodwill from the MC.
Nobody here wants to treat the whore nicely after catching her fucking MC's friend.
 

SSaann

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The tags wasnt there before Sherlock dont get in conversations between people if you dont know the context pls
The fuck, what conversartion? read carefully mate, I didnt respond to anybody that didnt respond to me previosly but whatever, it seems people come here only to complain cause a game dont match their every wish, if you dont like it is ok, but come on, try to be a little constructive in your criticism, otherwise youre only compaining like a bitch
 

Boardguy

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The boss won't be a Love Interest, more like side piece to get MC off, and won't receive any goodwill from the MC.
Nobody here wants to treat the whore nicely after catching her fucking MC's friend.
Yup, I get what the dev was going for with the MC getting his shit rocked but the first bits of humiliation were probably enough. Him getting beat half to death without even an ok attempt at fighting back made him look too much like a bitch.

I assumed the boss was never gonna be a love interest tbh, the best friend thing was bad enough(the fact that he didn't show up means he is probably dead anyway) but even with the reformed system in the game, she would be a shitty LI.
 
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