if I may offer one bit of constructive criticism, I would argue that in multiple choice situations, one expects a choice offered to matter, not to lead to an immediate "wrong choice, try again" screen.
I understand some of the multiple choices are listed with an eye towards further content being added (I am thinking about the choices at the home base location), but when you offer me to choose between say,
defend myself or save my daughter and only one of those choices doesn't end the game almost immediately, it probably works better if you don't waste time offering that choice (and having to work on the renderings that follow in the brief step between making the wrong choice and seeing why it is the wrong choice).
from a narrative point of view, and from a payload point of view, it just isn't worth the effort.
Now, I understand if you want to use that "split" to offer a few crude panels to underscore the hardship and letality of the environment, but I would suggest that working it into the narrative would work better... so, in the aforementioned multiple choice, I would have the daughter
be wounded/her resolve being affected/her status with her father change in further narrative..but definitely survive the moment.. that would make for a meaningful decision that impacts the game, rather than a game ender, which is both unsatisfying and pointless, not to mention extra work for you. Failing that, simply do not put that multiple choice option in the game and proceed the narrative. less work for you, and a better flowing game experience for us.
On a sidenote, I was digging the pissing scene with its contour of humiliation and "put in place" that resonates with the general vibe of the setting... if ever you decide to rework things again, I would suggest putting that back. It works within the narrative and it is a kink that a handful of other games explore without issue... an argument could also be made for the larger significance of the gesture in a desert setting... you're using precious bodily fluids to impart a lesson and establish rank in a kinky Dune-esque statement. (or maybe I'm overthinking it and arguing the case because it's one of my kinks..but you have to admit I make a good case

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