This VN has some pretty egregious errors: collosal info-dumps; characters being entirely too forthcoming about information and their feelings; random, stale sex scenes with zero build-up; that MC's dumb looking mustache. All-in-all, this is the kind of story you should vehemently hate.
But don’t.
Why?
Bad-ass-chicks.
Because there's Bad-ass-chicks. Everywhere.
Turn the corner? Bad-ass-chicks. Turn the other corner? Bad-ass-chicks. Looks towards the ceiling? Bad-ass-chicks.
They're everywhere, and it's awesome.
See your sis? She’s fucking the maid. See your other sis? She’s fucking the table. Mannn, these chicks are crazy.
And I fucking love it.
Bad-ass-chicks, man. Bad-ass-chicks.
And the mom? One of the first Bad-ass-chicks ever to grace your sorry-excuse for a screen? She’s the biggest, baddest dommy mommy you’ve ever seen in your life?
Lonely, sad MCs? She hugs that. Huge criminal enterprises ran by super bad-ass bad people? She runs that. The neck of that one dude who tried to fuck with our MC?
She snaps that.
I want nothing more than this guy’s
momlandlady to crush me with her thighs, but she’s not even the best part.
Boobs! There’s boobs everywhere! I love boobs! And these boobs? They’re veiny. Veiny boobs!
And now you might be thinking "Oh, veiny boobs? Ewww.", but then you, my dear gentleman, would be committing to a grave misunderstanding.
Consider the following scenario:
Incredibly hot bad-ass-chick: "What the fuck?! Were you just looking at my tits??"
You: "No Miss, I was merely making note of how preposterously veiny your chest was."
Incredibly hot bad-ass-chick: "Oh, that's okay then."
You: (Works. Every. Time.)
Hehe.
And so my dear gentleman, don’t make mistakes. Make successes. Read this VN, and read these chicks. Bad-ass-chicks with fat-veiny-dicks!
Tits.
I meant tits.
(Or did I?
.)
10/10.
TLDR. BAD-ASS-CHICKS WITH BIG-FAT-TITS. SAY NO MORE!
Edit: I kept reading, and I feel like a lot of the bad things get better. So in my completely, totally unbiased opinion, yes, this is a 12/10. You should read it.
Edit 2: Story might be getting a bit worse, but like, the girls just keep getting hotter, so.... I SWEAR I WAS GOING TO PUT SOMETHING INTELLIGENT HERE! I SWEAR!
Edit 3: Okay, I get it. I only like it for the renders and copious amounts of sex. BUT IS THAT SO BAD? IS THAT SO BAD?? Huge amount of content btw. Huge! You should read this. Totally.
But wait, be a super spy, super soldier god who fucks everything that moves with his massive tyranno cock. Do you know how many rich milfs you get to bend to your will? ALL THE RICH MILFS!! Every-single-rich-MILF-you-meet. How cool is that?!
MILF-Lovers, GET IN HERE!
Edit 4: Alright so I'm done for real this time. Just read it, please. I've done everything I can to convince you. Just remember:
Excellence doesn't come from greatness, it comes from fat tits. Fat. Veiny tits.