HTML Abandoned Desires [v0.0.1] [xCrazy]

[xCrazy]

Overview:
Emma is a normal girl who lived in a small country town.
She always dreamed of studying abroad and after graduation that's exactly what she did, she moved to another country to continue her studies.​

Thread Updated: 2023-07-26
Release Date: 2023-07-25
Developer: xCrazy -

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Version: 0.0.1
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux, Android, iOS
Language: English
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[xCrazy]

up?

 

[Bob69]

xCrazy Congratulations on your first release! Good luck!

 

[Nutluck]

After taking a look this is my main advice this early on.
1) dump the gifs and replace them with video's, gifs are low quality and huge in file size.
2) take the time to unify the image sizes. Images sizes are all over the place, a game looks much nicer if they are all roughly the same height.

 

[xCrazy]

After taking a look this is my main advice this early on.
1) dump the gifs and replace them with video's, gifs are low quality and huge in file size.
2) take the time to unify the image sizes. Images sizes are all over the place, a game looks much nicer if they are all roughly the same height.

Thanks you for your feedback!
1) gif are not in my "plan"
2) now i see what you mean and and I don't like it either

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Joe Steel]

The MC looks to be in her late 30s. Not the ideal model for the story.

 

[Candy1970]

Another game released before it has any content .......I call these not ready for prime time The intro is more like a Kinetic novel
no one likes a click fest though you style is interesting and your CSS work is well done , scroll click , scroll click , over and over again does not make a reader or player happy .......the whole intro could have been done in a scroll or two ...... so do what you can to minimize the monotony ....
Not to time lime .....if you have a hygiene requirement in a game a shower should not take HALF THE DAY away
nor should watching 2 non porn gifs on the computer .... so you need to work on your time management
now to the Character currently ZERO DEPTH ...why should she care about a neighbors emergency when she just met her ?
if she is supposed to be sweet and innocent why is she already peeking into windows ?
and if she is just starting college she shouldn't already look like she is in her mid 30's
Your Main character has to have some Agency , you have to immerse your player in the character , and make them want to care. The more involved you allow the player to be in the life and surroundings of your protagonist the better your game will be
if your plan is a sandbox style game THEM PLEASE fill it with some sand ie substance .

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[Nutluck]

Thanks you for your feedback!
1) gif are not in my "plan"
2) now i see what you mean and and I don't like it either

You're welcome. With GL we found 600 pixels tall is pretty ideal size. Image is big enough to see well but not to big it often requires much if any scrolling to see the text under it etc. Obviously depends on the size of the screen but for most 1080p monitors that seems to be the case.

 

[xCrazy]

Another game released before it has any content .......I call these not ready for prime time The intro is more like a Kinetic novel
no one likes a click fest though you style is interesting and your CSS work is well done , scroll click , scroll click , over and over again does not make a reader or player happy .......the whole intro could have been done in a scroll or two ...... so do what you can to minimize the monotony ....
Not to time lime .....if you have a hygiene requirement in a game a shower should not take HALF THE DAY away
nor should watching 2 non porn gifs on the computer .... so you need to work on your time management
now to the Character currently ZERO DEPTH ...why should she care about a neighbors emergency when she just met her ?
if she is supposed to be sweet and innocent why is she already peeking into windows ?
and if she is just starting college she shouldn't already look like she is in her mid 30's
Your Main character has to have some Agency , you have to immerse your player in the character , and make them want to care. The more involved you allow the player to be in the life and surroundings of your protagonist the better your game will be
if your plan is a sandbox style game THEM PLEASE fill it with some sand ie substance .

Thats why I "released" the game so early ...
and to respond to your questions
1. hygiene and time skips will be modified on time
2. about peeking... I don't know how to explain this easier ..... but somehow I need to start her "corruption" ( if you know what I mean)
3. about the long and boring start .. that was a mistake ... I change that intro a few times and that was what remains
4. about the MC ...I don't really choose her in particular... but for younger actresses is harder to find content ..

P.S this is just the first release .. to "collect" informations / ideas like yours .. and than to build a elaborate story

 

[xCrazy]

You're welcome. With GL we found 600 pixels tall is pretty ideal size. Image is big enough to see well but not to big it often requires much if any scrolling to see the text under it etc. Obviously depends on the size of the screen but for most 1080p monitors that seems to be the case.

thanks again, I'll keep it in mind and look forward to more opinions and ideas.

 

[Snoopy_H]

please add tag no sexual content

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Candy1970]

Thats why I "released" the game so early ...
and to respond to your questions
1. hygiene and time skips will be modified on time
2. about peeking... I don't know how to explain this easier ..... but somehow I need to start her "corruption" ( if you know what I mean)
3. about the long and boring start .. that was a mistake ... I change that intro a few times and that was what remains
4. about the MC ...I don't really choose her in particular... but for younger actresses is harder to find content ..

P.S this is just the first release .. to "collect" informations / ideas like yours .. and than to build a elaborate story

On the upside i do like your CSS work for border and back grounds etc .......I think you can make it a good game if you stick with it ... as for ways to introduce corruption
hidden find :
the neighbor's kid leaves his comic book behind you pick it up to take a look at it and Realize the comic book is just the cover and its hiding the porn mag inside ......

the possessed TV :
you turn on the TV and its all static you you call the repair guy that fixes it .....but after he leaves you sit down to watch and a porn channel keeps bleeding over into your show ... you call again .he comes out fixes it , you turn to watch tv and now every channel is porn ... Do you call him again ??

the park :
you go for a walk in the park since its a nice warm day you notice guys in the park wearing shorts but probably no underwear because you can see the rather large cock peeking out of the leg of the shorts . that bring up the park bathroom and exposure to glory holes ....and seeing random sex acts in the park ... flashers , perverts etc ....

then you add in all the places you can randomly get groped and harassed

The random packages you come home to find a box was delivered to your front porch there is no return on it so you don't know the sender you open it to find a dildo a vibrator a bottle of lube and a butt plug maybe they are in separate packages on different days .. you ask the delivery man who sent it he has no clue No you have a mystery on your hands .....was it the neighbors kid ? the TV repairman ? a stalker ? while you are trying to figure it out you get a random text from a blocked number on your phone " Hey baby do you like my package " with an image of senders huge hard cock dripping pre ...

Just a few idea's take them or leave them... good luck

 

[xCrazy]

On the upside i do like your CSS work for border and back grounds etc .......I think you can make it a good game if you stick with it ... as for ways to introduce corruption
hidden find :
the neighbor's kid leaves his comic book behind you pick it up to take a look at it and Realize the comic book is just the cover and its hiding the porn mag inside ......

the possessed TV :
you turn on the TV and its all static you you call the repair guy that fixes it .....but after he leaves you sit down to watch and a porn channel keeps bleeding over into your show ... you call again .he comes out fixes it , you turn to watch tv and now every channel is porn ... Do you call him again ??

the park :
you go for a walk in the park since its a nice warm day you notice guys in the park wearing shorts but probably no underwear because you can see the rather large cock peeking out of the leg of the shorts . that bring up the park bathroom and exposure to glory holes ....and seeing random sex acts in the park ... flashers , perverts etc ....

then you add in all the places you can randomly get groped and harassed

The random packages you come home to find a box was delivered to your front porch there is no return on it so you don't know the sender you open it to find a dildo a vibrator a bottle of lube and a butt plug maybe they are in separate packages on different days .. you ask the delivery man who sent it he has no clue No you have a mystery on your hands .....was it the neighbors kid ? the TV repairman ? a stalker ? while you are trying to figure it out you get a random text from a blocked number on your phone " Hey baby do you like my package " with an image of senders huge hard cock dripping pre ...

Just a few idea's take them or leave them... good luck

if I had money, I would throw it at you but...

Your ideas are very good, I will use one or two but they are a bit generic..

Thank you very much once again and I hope that others will share their ideas as you

 

[BgCntry89]

the link to your discord isn't working, please advise.

 

[xCrazy]

the link to your discord isn't working, please advise.

Thank you

I replaced it, now it should work

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[Candy1970]

if I had money, I would throw it at you but...

Your ideas are very good, I will use one or two but they are a bit generic..

Thank you very much once again and I hope that others will share their ideas as you

I have tried making games before and got writers block some times a little cheesy scene gets the idea's flowing and no need to toss money at me .... i just want you to make the best game you can , and not give up , like i did . I lost all desire to make games when the death of my parents left me dealing with wills courts and probate etc ... but it is what it is , one day i may try again .

 

[xCrazy]

I have tried making games before and got writers block some times a little cheesy scene gets the idea's flowing and no need to toss money at me .... i just want you to make the best game you can , and not give up , like i did . I lost all desire to make games when the death of my parents left me dealing with wills courts and probate etc ... but it is what it is , one day i may try again .

Ohh maaaann... when I read the first lines I was excited, but when I got to the part with the parents, all my good mood disappeared
I don't know what it's like to lose someone close to you, but I can tell you that I'm sorry to hear this.

I apologize for being rude, but if you have any ideas and would like to share them like me, please write them on discord (privately or on the game server) or you could write them right here!