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Sure, but it isn't needed. A temporary stick-up for a short jolt of fear, upsetting the girl, would've been plenty, not to mention how many other little asshole moves could be hinted at if needed to bolster further. This level of abuse as a prank just makes the guy reach as a psycho and makes him less believable as a person and his gf less believable to be dating him in the first place.That works but, it shouldn't preclude kicking Rob's ass now...
Yeah and total agreement on the surprising lack of meaning to the kidnapping. I also expected it to be a big plot point.Thank you guys again for the replies, I appreciate it. And Joey's Conscience, everything you said was perfectly constructive. I was talking about the ones who over exaggerate stuff and shit on a game they got for free.
Dev, don't get discouraged by the reviews. The important thing is to do your best in what you have a passion for. It's impossible to please everyone. I know we have the habit of focusing on bad reviews, but focus on what you want. In my opinion, the game is on the right track. We know there's not much story and it's just an introduction. I'm sure you'll do a great job.Thank you guys for the feedback, it's just unfortunate how some can be harsh and highly subjective with the reviews though. I can understand people saying there's no real plot yet, I probably should've extended 0.11 a little because the story really starts right at the beginning of the next update. Up until now, it's mostly been character introductions. I agree MC is far from being perfect, he's not meant to be. I’m also aware writing isn’t my strong suit, but I’m always trying to improve.
I also thought a kidnapping scene similar to the one in 22 Jump Street (where frat guys kidnap two others at gunpoint with ski masks, and it's no big deal afterwards because it really isn't that deep) was a good idea, didn't expect to see some people hate it with passion. I guess it's because this is a comedy movie and my game isn't really centered on that lol
lol a government plot is basically given at this point as both the fathers are working on a super secret project. Heck I thought the kidnapping was related to thatYeah and total agreement on the surprising lack of meaning to the kidnapping. I also expected it to be a big plot point.
It is difficult to place stops in a project like this because almost no stop is satisfying, but cocking a metaphoric gun before a break and then casually revealing it was a squirt gun held by a "friend" all along makes us feel lied to and says "there are no real stakes."
And even in games like this, we need some realistic stakes. I hope there isn't some huge conspiracy or plot MC gets involved with bc those are the least believable and often pale in comparison to the human relationships. Keep your stakes between characters. No offense, but no one is going to be playing this game to find out about a crime syndicate or government plot, etc.
Plot twist its all a lie and their secretly fucking each otherlol a government plot is basically given at this point as both the fathers are working on a super secret project. Heck I thought the kidnapping was related to that
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