Fantasyerotica1234
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- Nov 28, 2023
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I like the premise but lordy your weak right now.
Dialogue writing needs more unique personality per main girls. Dominant actions need to be explored more with writing describing the internal feelings of the MC feeling powerful and controlling.
There's no sense of interesting personality development with MC. Destroyer skills are a joke.
If your gonna have a guy called the Dextroyer dominate all the women, show that domination in his internal pov. Let the player grope and harras and coerce girls. The gold standard of domination games is Taffy Tales and Nympho Tamer. I'm not seeing a lot to be impressed by.
I'm not saying stop developing the game but I expect more creativity in both story and basic porn. This shit ain't that kinky compared to Patriarch
Dialogue writing needs more unique personality per main girls. Dominant actions need to be explored more with writing describing the internal feelings of the MC feeling powerful and controlling.
There's no sense of interesting personality development with MC. Destroyer skills are a joke.
If your gonna have a guy called the Dextroyer dominate all the women, show that domination in his internal pov. Let the player grope and harras and coerce girls. The gold standard of domination games is Taffy Tales and Nympho Tamer. I'm not seeing a lot to be impressed by.
I'm not saying stop developing the game but I expect more creativity in both story and basic porn. This shit ain't that kinky compared to Patriarch