Dont know if you'll reach my coment but here is my critism
The story was not the worse I've seen .Not sure if theres more then 1 path but i presume so
game play was mediocre at best , really need to implement whats clickable or not (just so we know at first glance what is clickable) A way to skip the loading between the scenes...
It's a game that need improvement , but keep at it . With practice comes results , a game connot improve if its not positevly criticised .
By the way it says part 14 , was wondering where are the first 13 part you description said it was a 3 part game?