[v0.4]
This game is pretty awesome so far with most of my gripes coming with things that happens towards the end of this version. Anyways, let's get into it.
Likes that mostly have to do with the start
- The humor seems pretty solid to me. The MC is portrayed as this charming, street-smart individual, and for the most part, I feel like he’s play this role exceptionally well and actually comes off as charming as he’s supposed to be in conversation, and that’s a big plsu for me.
- I love the setting. There’s orcs, dwarves, faeries, humans, ghosts, goblins... the list just goes on, and all the races interacting with each other while also having their own unique cultural/racial quirks has also been very cool — not to mention that all their renders are very unique and cool. I’m enjoying them a lot and truly believe that the girls are both uniquely strange while also being incredibly hot.
- MC start off the story with something that I find a little unconventional: he already has a girlfriend and/or steady relationship. Another that I find unconventional about this is that I actually really like her. She’s a charming individual that’s loving without being jealous, and I think she fits perfectly for this mostly harem setting. 10/10, would not trade her for anything.
- Piggybacking off that previous comment about relationships, a lot of the characters in this game are already have established relationships with other people. The MC’s coworker has a wife and daughter, another one’s happily married in a family of two, and even the guy down the street that looks like he runs a pizza parlor has a sexy fae girlfriend willing to introduce him to her family. I love the feeling of normalcy these kind of relationships establish in wake of the supernatural+haremy stuff going on, and I also like that the MC isn't creeping on them/NTRing them right from the the get-go — nah, he at least standards for any girl with a pussy. Anyways, I digress. Point is is that my favorite scene so far is probably playing ‘Moral Combat’ with the daughter of the MC’s coworker without having any talk of sex or sexualizing her. Literally just playing ‘Moral Combat’ with a kid that actually acts like a kid. 10/10 didn’t know how much I needed a scene like that in a game( And oh god do I hope I didn’t just jinx it by saying that).
- Starting stories with death scenes doesn’t usually work me, but this worked spectacularly. Having the dying guy give important instructions on what to do for his inevitable return actually encourages me to pay attention to what’s going in the dying scene so that I don’t miss any key plot points. Most scenes just use a bunch of throwaway information that makes it completely irrelevant. At least this one clues you in on what might be going in the background.
- I really liked the animations, small and brief as they might be. I don’t actually remember any specifics ones, but I do remember there being some sort of animation with the MC’s girlfriend that caught me by surprise — a pleasant surprise. It was something like a quick hug or something? Regardless, the animations so far are definitely effective.
Dislikes that mostly have to do with the end(of this version)
- I dislike the ghost girl plotline. At first, dealing with the problems she caused was treated like some sort of incredibly urgent, life or death situation. Instead, we have the problem put off for 10+ scenes after an initial failure to fix it.
Then we go another 10+ scenes until we find out that — actually — it’s even worse we initially thought! The MC needs to get rid of it immediately, or he’ll be doomed life of eternal suffering madness… Only to be sidetracked by another 10+ scenes completely irrelevant to that plotline. Yeah, I’m just not buying that the spoken urgency is as urgent as it actually seems based on the way it’s being handled. I’d say either finish the plotline or stop making it out be such a big deal all the time.
- Then there’s the fact that there’s way too many characters towards the end. I’ve lost of track of the number of girls the MC works with. He has so many partners for so many separate plotlines that I’m getting confused. In reality, I don’t think it’s as complicated as I’m making it sound, but everything is so compartmentalized to what each character’s role is that I really wish that we could bundle some of these roles into one character. For example, instead of having 3-4 contacts with the police and 3-4 contacts with the supernatural dudes, how about we just have 1 that works closely with him for each and have these other characters take more minor roles? I’m just getting a little exhausted by how many people he’s working with while having no real time to build a good rapport with any one girl. That’s all. Just want them to switch off a little less fast and often, I think.
- Finally, the sex scenes. WHY ARE THERE NO MONSTER GIRL SEX SCENES? WHAT IN THE FLYING FUCK, MR. DEV — SIR, MY BELOVED WONDERFUL SIR? HOW CAN YOU HAVE SO MANY HOT, DELICIOUS MONSTER GIRLS AND THEN HAVE ALL THE SEX SCENES BE WITH ONLY THE HUMAN ONES?! WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK, MY MAN?! I get that you might be saving the best for last, but COME ON, instead of having monster girl scenes, why are you making 5/7 of all the sex scenes you’ve made so far ABOUT A PASTY ASS MOTHER-FUCKING WHITE GIRL WHO’S SO PRISSY SHE GETS A LITTLE UPSET WHEN THE MC’S HITTING THAT FINE ELVEN BUSSY ON THE DOWN LOW?! WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK MAN? I CAME HERE FOR THAT MONSTER KUSH, NOT SOME WHITE GIRL’S BUSH, F-FUCKING-S!
AND SHIT MAN, ON SECOND LOOK, THAT WASN’T EVEN ONE WHITE GIRL — BUT THREE DIFFERENT ONE’S! HOLE-EE-SHIT, THEY LOOK SO MUNDANE AND UNATTRACTIVE NEXT TO MONSTER GIRLS THAT I COULDN’T EVEN TELL THEM APART! GREEN GIRLS, RISE UP! GREEN GIRLS, RISE UP!(I swear I’m not racist, I just hate humans in general.)
TLDR
Would’ve been 5 stars with more monster girl scenes. Fin.