VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Deviancy [v0.4 Bugfix] [Mr. B0NES]

This is an excellent title comprised of quality renders, witty banter, and believable characters. In other words: it's time well spent.

The story is well written and having an established relationships with the sister is a huge plus to my mind, as is the MC trying to slow things down. It's quite refreshing – especially given the social insecurities of the sister – and a nice contrast to how things usually and do develop with the mom. The latter being a true milf in every sense of the word(…s) making both characters well worth pursuing.

The supporting cast is quite varied ranging from bookwormy to sporty, from timid to spicy. That being said, not all of the potentially wooable characters had enough spotlight yet to have them grow beyond their initial stereotypes. I do like the choice of the milfy neighbor not being portrayed as a cougar (though smooth runs the water where the brook is deep) which also leaves the spot open to be filled by the yet to encounter aunt.

Giggity!
based on 0.2 patched

This is a fantastic game! The renders are good across the board. I think there is a good variety of different types of girls to choose between, with more to come. The highlight of this game though is easily the writing. The writing is solid throughout, but the banter that exists between characters, particularly the MC and little "tenant" is fantastic. It's witty and fun and something that is rarely found. I would tell everyone to play this game, you won't regret it.

Excellent writing, interesting story, excellent renders! The optional incest patch is easy to apply and blends seamlessly into the game. Definatly a must see game! There needs to be more like this on the site!

I dont know what to say about this one. For me it was supposed to be a good one, i mean it has incest and you can change names.

Renders are good, the milf actually looks mature, and not like a 25year old with some fancy hair dressing all young and slutty.

I guess i dont like when things develop offscreen, cause thats when the relationship between the "tenants" begin, before the game starts.
I dont personally like when i dissagree with the mc. His sister is trying to get his meat but he is trying not to give in to lust for whatever reasons (insert plot) and i think "Oh cmon! grab her by the pussy already!"

There is a point system, but with 0 point you already have everyone craving for your massive cock (of course it has to be massive and have a so far stretched texture)

Everyone is so smart and witty, is not like is not fun to read, but eventually it may be. It happened to me, seing that everybody uses the language, the same comebacks. I get siblings may mimic eachothers behavior or tastes or the way of speaking, but this for me its too boring.
Another thing i dont like is making incest all about addressing eachother as bro and sis all the time, i mean dont they have names?

Thats it so far, i hope it gets better in the future, right now i decline to keep playing.

THIS GAME DESERVES MORE ATTENTION!!! Especially from incest lovers. Seriously, even at v0.1 - I think it could be classified as a precious rarity in the genre.

I'd usually hold off from giving a game 5/5 in the first update, believe me, there's a (very) good reason behind it, a cute little reason called SUZY . OMFG - this girl is so insanely adorable - a perfect little sister! And not just her looks (which is plenty adorable BTW), she seems like a sister whom you'd love even if you take away all the sexual stuff! I'm planning on listing all other reasons why you should give this game a try - but believe me, she's reason enough to play this game!

Now let's talk about other stuff - what makes this game a rare gem among incest games. Why do we play incest games in the first place rather than watching some (shitty) incest themed porn? Obviously, no one wants to get blue-balled on purpose. Also if you could just slap a tag like "sister" on any character you fuck - would that be a good incest game? HELL NO! If you say that she's my sister then 1) she has to first feel like a human being, 2) she has to feel like my sister - so basically you must have depth of character and relationship. This game seems to have nailed it on both points! I must emphasize how hard it is to do that - in this game, the relationship between the MC and his sister is a weird amalgam of sibling love and sexual love - not an easy thing to pull off for a por... ahem... "adult" game. You actually feel like her big brother and feel a brotherly affection for her. This like the very thing that has been from those dozens of other bro/sis incest games out there. There's a small chance it might make you uncomfortable - but hey! It was YOU who chose to play an incest game! Or maybe you're so twisted (like me!) that you actually want to feel uncomfortable, hehe!

Two other things make this game unique. First of all, you're already in a relationship with your sister when the game starts. So there's no buildup? Doesn't it take the depth out of their relationship? NO! The way they act, their inner ramblings - things they think of in retrospect that gives depth to their relationship, and this makes perfect sense! Things like this take time - under normal (there are exceptions) circumstances, even the craziest bro-sis duo don't simply confess their attraction one day and fuck each other the next day! It's kinda refreshing to be put in this position - it takes the grind away and lets you start with a relationship already fuming with passion. Awesome! And, nevertheless, there's still huge potential for further build-up.

The second thing that's different - your sister is super into you!! Also, her insecurities are so adorably cute!! This is so refreshing from most other incest games where you are the pervert and you basically have to worship your mom/sis/daughter to get into their pants! On the contrary, in this game, you're the one who's pushing the brakes! Don't get me wrong - this doesn't mean that your sister is the pervert - it just means that you're the more mature one among the two. I don't know about you guys, I myself identify more with such a reasonable and responsible character, rather than some pervert who only thinks with his dick.

This game is so early in its development and still, I decided to write such a big review - just goes to show how much I appreciate it! There are other good prospects of the game like good renders and stuff and also other female characters like the mom, and other girls. It's still too early to comment on them - but I like what I've seen so far. Eventually, other reviewers can fill you in on them.

My respect goes to the dev - and plz, plz, plz don't abandon it! The incest genre will lose something precious if it's abandoned.

Off to an excellent start. The renders are good, though not truly amazing. There's a nice variety of girls, all of whom are attractive in different ways. The little sister is absolutely adorable.
For me, the writing is where it truly shines, particularly the dialog. The only criticism I can make is that it could use some proofreading for spelling and grammar, but it's not bad enough to drag down the writing. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Good start for an intro. Two full in game days.
PROS
Renders are nice
Story is good so far
Decent amount of content for a first release
CONS
Few scene clippings(might just be on my end)
MC appears to be a "yes" man
Overall
Story has a decent flow going on. The dev is precise with the direction of things. Several choices for a demo. MC does come off as just giving in to a certain someone in game. It's not bad, just would be nice to say no without plotting payback from the girl. Might just be nothing comes of it though. I recommend giving this one a try. It has a good story, renders and characters. I look forward to where this one goes in the future.

Glad to see dev is a fan of Mass Effect. If dev can appreciate or has a bit of Bioware's DNA--which is tell a great story then we are in for a treat.

So far I'm pulled into the story. The models could use a bit of work. Suzy's face seems a bit plastically. None of the models came out super hot to me at the moment. So yeah, could use a bit of work in that department. But if the story is good then that could easily be overlooked.

Wow, another great visual novel. Fell in love with Suzy from the start. Beautiful graphics, good story, what more can you ask for? Check this one out and support the dev if you can. This is definitely a worthy effort.