eccentic

Member
Aug 31, 2017
119
62
Blue balls the game.
What story is actually finished in this game cuz i didn't find any finished path.
 

Nymphonomicon

Active Member
Jan 10, 2019
997
713
Would be nice if more of these plot options were more fleshed out. I wound up having to give up on the entire "bad side of town" because it doesn't go very far before getting to a point where it's nothing but "this doesn't exist" text choices.
 

Someguy01

Member
Aug 1, 2017
124
161
Better to add asterisks at forks that lead to finished content, that way he he as to add only 10 asterisks instead of a thousand, give or take.
I'd go even further and make notes of the primary fetishes found along each of the character paths. Make it a little easier to avoid things you just aren't into. It's pretty disappointing to be interested in the first few clicks and then find out the story is almost entirely about something that's of zero interest to you.
 

Baftroid

Newbie
Dec 10, 2017
15
4
I get an error message "this story got messed up" on both html files and doesn't work.
That's on both the links here and the ones on Patreon.
 

Kori Kasai

New Member
Nov 22, 2017
11
4
Damn man I like the setups for so many of these stories. I think my favorite is Layla and Lilith. Shame I've got no damn clue when it's going to be worked on.
Honestly same. I started off with that but it honestly just felt so guided as so many choices, the ones i wanted, were blocked off so the best i could do was follow it down and get stuck. I wanted her to like me from the start and not have to go through hoops
 
Jul 11, 2019
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Writing is pretty great, but like many point out the problem is all the deadends and no warning that they're coming, making it hard to get invested. I'm in the ´I'd rather one branch was done at a time than 5% of a quarter of them done once in a while´ camp. I think the game would lose its biggest flaw if the design philosophy was to add in completed content with each update (even if it's just a single branch) rather than a little of this and that which gives a screen or three before the big red wall hits again. We'd get something to look forwards to and we'd get the satisfaction of a conclusion to the storyline we're following, best of both worlds in my opinion. That said, I speak strictly for myself.
 

Troqu

Well-Known Member
Aug 6, 2017
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New release is available:
 

germz

New Member
Sep 26, 2019
4
7
New release is available:
I just got a bit burned out on writing primarily porn.
(...)
for the next little while, expect the updates to be primarily story-focused
I have no clever jokes for this. The dead story threads write themselves.
 

Aligator

New Member
Jan 16, 2018
2
0
I have no clever jokes for this. The dead story threads write themselves.
This is the first time that I see the author of a porn game, on the patreon of their porn game, say that they will not focus on the porn in the porn game anymore.

Man, for "the biggest update", this was really, really disappointing. If I were a patreon of his, that would be the moment I would pull out.
 

x~Minchen~x

Member
Feb 26, 2019
141
157
There are a lot of good ideas and I wouldn't even mind less porn - but every path seems to be unfinished and going nowhere. Maybe just stick with one character for now. It must be hard to write for several characters at once anyway.
 

Iscay4312

New Member
Aug 21, 2020
6
17
All the dead branches are annoying, I've not been able to find a branch that is more than 3-4 pages long.
 
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