Ren'Py Diana Story [v0.16] [DenZRG]

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The Diana Story 0.16 release—as I mentioned earlier—is a small update. It adds the foundational elements that let you progress to subsequent days.

After this release, version 0.20 will follow. It will be available exclusively to Patreon supporters and will include much more content.

Download PC: Mega

For anyone who needs it, this is the browser version.

Download WWW: Mega

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will it go public after a while or stay on patreon?

 

[CutieLvr]

Ok, she is a real cutie for starters, but at first she would leave the bathroom door open and her corruption went up 3 times. Now, she closes the door (not my choice) so her corruption is stuck at 30%. Is that it for this version? She isn't being molested on the bus, or at work. All she can do is earn money. Is that it?

 

[Mercedes]

I played the latest version 0.16 today.
Unfortunately, nothing has really changed since my review.
You simply don't notice any progress. Neither in the story development nor in the development of the statistics to follow or avoid certain paths. There's also too much empty space in the game and questionable design decisions.

You look at the map. There are three buildings between the cafe and the apartment.
It explains why the cafe owner wants to rent the room, but not why MC has to take the train to work and even has time for a nap.
You work from morning to afternoon, have to use the time until bedtime with pointless naps, and never see your roommate.
You serve two drinks correctly, deliberately make the third wrong (because maybe something will happen), and don't get a tip. Do you have to pay the tips from the first two customers to the third customer as compensation, or what?

It's been six weeks since I first played and wrote the review. During this time, only more boredom was implemented into the game.

 

[denzrg21]

I played the latest version 0.16 today.
Unfortunately, nothing has really changed since my review.
You simply don't notice any progress. Neither in the story development nor in the development of the statistics to follow or avoid certain paths. There's also too much empty space in the game and questionable design decisions.

You look at the map. There are three buildings between the cafe and the apartment.
It explains why the cafe owner wants to rent the room, but not why MC has to take the train to work and even has time for a nap.
You work from morning to afternoon, have to use the time until bedtime with pointless naps, and never see your roommate.
You serve two drinks correctly, deliberately make the third wrong (because maybe something will happen), and don't get a tip. Do you have to pay the tips from the first two customers to the third customer as compensation, or what?

It's been six weeks since I first played and wrote the review. During this time, only more boredom was implemented into the game.

Thank you for your feedback — I’ll do my best to meet your expectations in version 0.22.
I read the comments and try to learn from them. Unfortunately, I can only work a few minutes a day due to a lack of time, but this will change soon — the winter season is starting and I’ll be spending most of my time at home, which should result in more new content.

 

[JamTart]

It's a cute little game, but needs much more content. Especially at home between MC and tenant. If the Dev really is willing to learn, then learn that most people hate mini games, especially ones with a time limit. I'm sure there are some who love them, but I hate them. I know this is TMI, but mini games dry me up so fast that I just give up on the game. You want me playing your game, tell me a story. The more taboo the better, although I'm aware that's not for everyone. One last thing, thank you for doing a female protag game. It really is appreciated. xxx