VN Ren'Py Diary of My Perversion [v0.6] [Neytan]

[max_z_smith]

Good start. A few bugs (\tl\English\day1_2_3.rpy, line 247 has a slash that shouldn't be there at the start of the line {/i} -> {i}.
Also a few places where we get spanish options even when I'm on english. But otherwise it's an interesting story, eager to see what comes from it.

 

[lemirent]

Overall, the visuals are okay. There is something strange going on with the characters’ teeth, so I was kind of distracted by that in some scenes, but okay. I think that some characters could be more sexy, but this is just a thing of tastes. There is definitely room for improvement, and sometimes it seems like the proportions are a bit off too. However, the game is animated, and I liked that, so you can also enjoy that while playing.

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[DragonMatt]

Just downloaded the game and started playing and get this error code.

 

[CrazyRosie]

Good start. Looking good.

 

[Adramme]

The mother should make out with her daughter in the last scene. but no nothing...
I wanted something. Now i'm angry

 

[ahxjosu]

is it going be harem?

 

[Hunscs7]

Two untranslated lines and one incorrect syntax around [/i] aside, this is some really good stuff

 

[Evan Treborn]

a short but a good start.

 

[TheDick69+]

Up to a good start. Don't forget to translate all lines.

 

[Leafkiller]

This doesn't look like incest or loli. It looks like college hook ups.

 

[bigphil963]

This doesn't look like incest or loli. It looks like college hook ups.

how to say you haven't played the game without saying you haven't played

 

[Morgana_Le_Fay]

There have been a couple of lines that have not been translated from Spanish to English, including one that breaks the script because of a closing "{i}" tag that doesn't have an opening (the start of the line is another {\i} tag).

In

# game/day1_2_3.rpy:72
translate English day1_2_3_7b64abe9:

    # mc "{i}(Fui un idiota en sentirme \"especial\" porque me mostraste eso a mí, pero seguro lo debes hacer con todos.){/i}"
    mc "{i}(I was an idiot to feel \"special\" because you showed that to me, but surely you must do it to everyone.){/i}"

I had to change the line myself.

 

[zeraligator]

Anybody got the 0.2?
It's been out for patrons for 2 months already, as of today.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Diary of My Perversion [v0.2] [Neytan]

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[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this

 

[Agent6969]

Thx for this m8

 

[Vualen]

Looks really nice, but there is need more work on animations as they aren't smooth. Also I would like to hear some sounds and moans during scenes

 

[bamachine]

Like the different possible LIs. I like variety and also not the same cookie cutter models. That said, needs some serious proofreading. Several syntax errors and many lines still in Spanish, on the English script.

 

[Yngling]

Review v.0.2 (updated 0.3):

The premise is that all game characters have a kind of fetish.

The MC is basically good at everything, including being a really nice person, with one problem: he can't get it up. The solution seems to be that might be more into petite 18+ girls than he likes to admit. However once his dick has been restarted he doesn't seem to have problems with more mature women anymore.

The love interests also have some kind of fetish, which you will discover along the way, and then decide for yourself if you want to indulge in the fetish with her.

Pro's:
- Good looking models, over very diverse body types, skin types, faces, but also personalities.
- Pretty diverse fetishes so far, such as exhibitionism, loli, watersports (optional), cum eating (by the love interest, not the MC!)
- Several cute characters.
- Generally pretty good renders (there are some minor issues but overall I like it)
- For a 0.2 a fair amount of content, easily 1 hr playtime, including a few sex scenes and quite a few more with nudity.

Con's:
- Not that many choices so far
- Some lines remain in Spanish rather than English
- Some dialogue lines clearly translated from Spanish to English (e.g. the use of the word "daughter" when addressing the daughter, I think it's common in Spanish but in English I think nobody really does that commonly). However, the dialogues are not bad in my opinion, just sub-optimal.
Above two points got a lot better in 0.3
- Scenes are pretty short and transition between different scenes is a bit sudden. For example, you are interacting with somebody in one place, the next scene you are suddenly interacting with somebody else in a different place. Some outdoor / walking scenes would be nice as a transition.

Other issues:
- Incest tag: The MC was raised in an orphanage and as such has no known relatives. Two LI's have cute daughters. Nothing so far really happened between mother and daughter, but I can see it happening in the future.
- Harem tag is not present, but it looks like it should be there in the near future.
- The dev seems to be working on 3 games in parallel now. I hope that works out for them...

Verdict:
I have to subtract one point for dialogues, but otherwise a solid and sadly overlooked VN.

4/5,

Might become 5/5 if dialogues are perfected and some more choices get implemented. Also story telling could be better polished.