Ren'Py Dickgirl Dorm Revamp [v0.4b] [Icarus Media]

[PhazeUFO]

It's only 0.2 it got voted for me to start this and although last month was supposed to be a break I still did this and the update to Isadora The Wife Explorer. It will be prioritised once Futa Grandma 2 is done, which I'm going to do singly from now on until completion.



Sorry patrons voted for the spouses, they wanted american male spouse and Japanese female spouse.

I'm fine with a spouse. This one is just an idiot. The Japanese wife makes me feel like I am in a generic NTR comic though. Now all we need is a fat old futa to cuck us...

 

[DMSTS]

I've learnt from the old version and this time I'm using the players house as a mini form of the dorm, so the talk code, the random events (talking, flirting, groping etc), the change of likes and opinions in game, I'm going to code that first for the players house and then I can copy and paste the code from the house to the dorm in game. Should make progress a bit faster. I mean I already have the talk code done for 0.2 for the house.

Well. Damn...

I really liked previous version...

And I strongly feel that this is a huge downgrade...

+The backgrounds are awesome (as good as before).
-The characret design change is strange many characters look worse than before. They had some uniqness and now they are nearly clones. (Like "Amina", "!YOLANDA!"[she look like a hobbit], "Chancellor" and "Ekaterina Romanov")

This point maybe just my runt, but the rest are serious...

-Traveling... The links dont fit the screen and you have to press them 20 times to get to where you want. (It was a little hard before, but now it is impossible)
-Following that the random encounters are impossible to "farm" (In previous version I could jump to and from location in 2 seconds. Now It is hard to just navigate)
-The "talk" is broken... You don't see characters on maps and can't know if there is anyone to talk to.

Not sure how to even play the game in this state...


Jeez...

You could just refine the previous system and make it better...
Now it feels like you tried to remake it from 0 in a day.

Try to limit the ammount of locations or group them like in the previous version...
And, PLEASE, make sure that you have the lists fit the screen! (Maybe make a hub screen where player can travel to "outside", "common rooms", "bedrooms", "offices". And then put all the rooms according to groups?)

If the last version was 4.5-5 for me, this one is 2...

I hope you manage to fix this mess.

 

[dragonflame]

its has potential.
1) best friend doesn't need your permission to ask you to have sex with your wife
2) location for all the characters. so we can know who is in there
3) other futa don't need permission
that the list for now

 

[Icarus Media]

Well. Damn...

I really liked previous version...

And I strongly feel that this is a huge downgrade...

+The backgrounds are awesome (as good as before).
-The characret design change is strange many characters look worse than before. They had some uniqness and now they are nearly clones. (Like "Amina", "!YOLANDA!"[she look like a hobbit], "Chancellor" and "Ekaterina Romanov")

This point maybe just my runt, but the rest are serious...

-Traveling... The links dont fit the screen and you have to press them 20 times to get to where you want. (It was a little hard before, but now it is impossible)
-Following that the random encounters are impossible to "farm" (In previous version I could jump to and from location in 2 seconds. Now It is hard to just navigate)
-The "talk" is broken... You don't see characters on maps and can't know if there is anyone to talk to.

Not sure how to even play the game in this state...


Jeez...

You could just refine the previous system and make it better...
Now it feels like you tried to remake it from 0 in a day.

Try to limit the ammount of locations or group them like in the previous version...
And, PLEASE, make sure that you have the lists fit the screen! (Maybe make a hub screen where player can travel to "outside", "common rooms", "bedrooms", "offices". And then put all the rooms according to groups?)

If the last version was 4.5-5 for me, this one is 2...

I hope you manage to fix this mess.
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In the interests of honesty I did hover a bit over the abandoned tag when I woke up this morning, I did 0.1 and 0.2. in "Break" periods, (0.2. of this and the update to Isadora The Wife Explorer was around the same time despite having a month off. I think getting ALL the game locations it will have as well as the talk function for everywhere was pretty good going considering it was a break for 0.1. then 0.2. and finally updating Isadora as well.

That said like most of the feedback so far, i accept. It's very early stages and my way of working is make a basic way of doing things and then build up, once Futa Grandma 2 is done I can focus on this full time. Specifics:

* Clones - Unfortunately Honey Select 2 being far more easier for posing and for scene creation it does suffer with the issue that you get that uncanny valley, I've tried to combat this by making them stand out in their personality and garments. Katya funily enough has already gone through one remodelling.

* Travelling - Are you playing on phone or smaller screen? I'll have a look at that but mine works fine. I was planning linking travelling to the arrow keys and the minimap to be honest.

* Random Encounter Farming - At present this suffers the problem of its predecessor in that if you don't meet the conditions it blank screens or returns you to where you were, I plan instead to code an exception for every event so that if you don't meet conditions something will still occur.

I hear you as regards picking up the old one and continuing with that, however sex scene posing and changing environment on the fly doesn't work with the old engine. In fact the old engine was from 2003 and was sustained by mods until 2 to 3 years ago when the main site went down. Now there are two sites that bicker and fight over making things and I didn't want to get involved with that. Although....I did recently download one of the latest versions of it....to to play with.

As I will say to everyone, this is a free game and in the early stages made when I was supposed to be on break and making fuck all. I will continue and I will listen, but until it's at basic playability I can understand, but ask you to look at the, I can't believe I'm gonna say this...."potential".

its has potential.
1) best friend doesn't need your permission to ask you to have sex with your wife
2) location for all the characters. so we can know who is in there
3) other futa don't need permission
that the list for now

1) Wait she just does it anyway in your playthrough? Let me know as I definately want that stuff to be player choice.
2) At first I can make a list on screen, later upgrades may feature cutouts of characters as I build up.
3) The other futa shouldn't have interactions yet?

 

[mlkg1g2]

That's what I'm aiming for in terms of her character progression. One of my roommates from Uni was from Qatar and he had some difficulties with dealing with the culture clash, but at the end of it all he kinda accepted it. Originally he started out vocally and audibly homophobic, wouldn't speak to women unless he had to (and he was doing engineering based studies so there were only a few) and yeah, I did wonder what the jug was in the shared bathroom (I discovered later they don't use toilet paper). By the end he could have a conversation with women (without any touching), wouldn't make his feelings known audibly about gays and whilst that was wonderful, I couldn't convince him of the merits of toilet paper, but you win some you lose some.

The fact she's wearing a Hijab as opposed to the Niqab already shows some progression in that regard. Gradually you can move her to either to a more liberal one or an even more fundamentalist one. She also struggles with the idea of being a futa in terms of it being an unknown area for Islamic Jurisprudence vis a vis Shariah Law. None of the 4 schools of jurisprudence (off the top of my head: Shanafi, Hanbali, Maliki, Qaddafi?) have dealt with that quandary so she doesn't know how to feel and you can guide in that as well.

And no I don't take offence, you explained it nicely and politely.

the four schools of thought, not jurisprudence, and most of Asia wash their asses; don't just wipe; it's not just an Islamic thing. Also, Qaddafi lol is a dictator, not a school of thought.

The four schools are not the authority on rulings meaning they are not where Muslims get rulings about everything. The four schools, the ones who made them, didn't set out to make them; they were just very knowledgeable and wrote a lot about the religion, its explanations, and rulings based on evidence or derived from evidence. All four of them are students of each other, and they wrote a lot, so people started following them. That's it. If they don't mention a specific ruling on something, it doesn't matter; they are not the authority, and the Quran and the Sunnah are.

Also, most Muslim students and immigrants don't change their minds about lgbt; they just hide it to be respectful, just like you would probably hide your support of lgbt if you visited their country.
Anyway you should tone down on politics and religion no one wants remember God when jerking off unless youre weirdo. but hey its your game you can do whatever the fuck you want, i dont care.

 

[Kionatria]

1) best friend doesn't need your permission to ask you to have sex with your wife
3) other futa don't need permission

1) I tested it, and your bestie doesn't do it without your permission. Though I wouldn't mind the two getting together without your permission. I mean, you had the option of telling Sati that you had sex with your lecturer even though you two were banging, so I would assume that Sati would understand that you have no issue sharing your wife even without her telling you.
3)Well, like I mentioned above, I wouldn't mind other futas getting together with your wife, with or without permission.

Speaking of the wife, could it be possible that, if your char was female, you allow Sati to put a baby in your wife's oven? Seeing that your wife had sex with your bestie without protection, it would make sense that, eventually, Sati would (accidentally or not) get her pregnant. Though that shouldn't ruin your marriage, as you trust Sati not to run away with your wife.

 

[PhazeUFO]

1) I tested it, and your bestie doesn't do it without your permission. Though I wouldn't mind the two getting together without your permission. I mean, you had the option of telling Sati that you had sex with your lecturer even though you two were banging, so I would assume that Sati would understand that you have no issue sharing your wife even without her telling you.
3)Well, like I mentioned above, I wouldn't mind other futas getting together with your wife, with or without permission.

Speaking of the wife, could it be possible that, if your char was female, you allow Sati to put a baby in your wife's oven? Seeing that your wife had sex with your bestie without protection, it would make sense that, eventually, Sati would (accidentally or not) get her pregnant. Though that shouldn't ruin your marriage, as you trust Sati not to run away with your wife.

Your best friend lacks a sack, which I assume is why she can bang your wife without anything.

Also, most Muslim students and immigrants don't change their minds about lgbt; they just hide it to be respectful, just like you would probably hide your support of lgbt if you visited their country.
Anyway you should tone down on politics and religion no one wants remember God when jerking off unless youre weirdo. but hey its your game you can do whatever the fuck you want, i dont care.

Most people I have known or heard of know what to prepare for when visiting another country and will keep their mouths shut about things they disagree with that are widely accepted where they are. I always treated the characters as fetishes since this is a porn game. You have the Muslim who is clearly bigoted and for those with a dom fetish and the Jew who is your buddy for those with a sharing fetish. Same with Nicole who plays the role as the innocent friend that is manipulated into cucking.

 

[Cynical Uke]

Speaking of the wife, could it be possible that, if your char was female, you allow Sati to put a baby in your wife's oven?

Most of the variations of the 'Sati banging your wife on the floor' scene seem to emphasize the moment she cums inside and breeds her and that you just let it happen, so I'd be surprised if that weren't a likely possibility once this is developed further if pregnancy is planned in any aspect.

 

[Kionatria]

Your best friend lacks a sack, which I assume is why she can bang your wife without anything.

Then how can she cum inside both her and yourself(if you chose the option of having her fuck you during school)? And she came a lot, as well.

 

[Icarus Media]

Internal and external testes depending on character, some have the former, some have the latter. Lets also not forget the pill being a factor.

 

[DMSTS]

* Clones - Unfortunately Honey Select 2 being far more easier for posing and for scene creation it does suffer with the issue that you get that uncanny valley, I've tried to combat this by making them stand out in their personality and garments. Katya funily enough has already gone through one remodelling.

* Travelling - Are you playing on phone or smaller screen? I'll have a look at that but mine works fine. I was planning linking travelling to the arrow keys and the minimap to be honest.

* Random Encounter Farming - At present this suffers the problem of its predecessor in that if you don't meet the conditions it blank screens or returns you to where you were, I plan instead to code an exception for every event so that if you don't meet conditions something will still occur.

*Clones
Okay. I suspected, that there will be some kind of "can't use old models/design due to engine stuff"...
It's a shame, but if you can't then you can't (at least fix Yolanda, her model looked truly scary [or it is just me who thinks so?]).

*Travelling
I use PC, but the location list start somewhere around the center of the screen and goes to the upper edge of the screen.
Maybe there are no scaling/resolution problems, but it looks as if there is.

And the main problem with travelling is that to go from "1" to a location "2" and back to "1" it takes ~4-6 clicks, when it has to take 3 (As far as I remember there were no such complications in previous version...).

Also sometimes when you go to a hub location with several rooms it kick you out to a previous hub (Like when you go to a screen with girls rooms and after leaving one of them it kicks you out to the lobby and you have to go to a hall woth girls room again [maybe it was in othe hub, I don't remember]... Jeez. These explanations may only complicate my statement).
So, if I want to go to a girl 1 room and then to a girl 2 room I have to reenter hub instead of going back to the list of rooms.

*Random encounters
Not sure what exactly you mean and how it will look...
Just try to make it and we will tell you if it is good or bad.


Anyway.
When you update it I will definetely runt again and tell you all the problems that remain (Or will I prise you?)...
I'll wait for the good update

Yours truly,
Me

 

[PhazeUFO]

Then how can she cum inside both her and yourself(if you chose the option of having her fuck you during school)? And she came a lot, as well.

Testicles do not produce cum.

Internal and external testes depending on character, some have the former, some have the latter. Lets also not forget the pill being a factor.

Internal testicles has always been a silly thing as there is a reason our nuts are outside away from our bodies. I didn't consider the pill as she didn't show balls. I also might be confusing the game with another, but wasn't it stated that the pill is less effective for futa?

*Clones
Okay. I suspected, that there will be some kind of "can't use old models/design due to engine stuff"...
It's a shame, but if you can't then you can't (at least fix Yolanda, her model looked truly scary [or it is just me who thinks so?]).

I liked the old Yolanda model. Her face blacked out by the hood was a nice touch. Also, she had straight black hair if I recall, which reminded me of folk like TLC.

 

[Chunkymayo]

Testicles do not produce cum.

where did you get your urology license at?

 

[tobdeg]

Hi Icarus Media. I recently played both this and the revamped version. I really like Sati and June. June certainty have more personality than Sam. I hope they have more content. And I agree that navigation could use improvements in the revamped version even though the gameplay loop is not that different from the original I feel its more tedious.

 

[PhazeUFO]

where did you get your urology license at?

Reality. Testicles produce sperm, which although will be in semen, they don't produce the liquid itself.

 

[Chunkymayo]

Reality. Testicles produce sperm, which although will be in semen, they don't produce the liquid itself.

would you also happen to be a hair stylist? you seem to be very good at splitting hairs.

 

[Olivaqi]

I am looking forward to the next update.

 

[Aion_Abyss]

why can't you be a trans girl in this?

 

[Icarus Media]

why can't you be a trans girl in this?

Because they're futa? And the Futa protag option isn't in yet.

 

[Aion_Abyss]

Because they're futa? And the Futa protag option isn't in yet.

i thought the game was focused on futas being government experiments or some such which is why they're in the dorm so I didn't expect MC to be able to be a futa.

Nvm then