Keep up the good work. I enjoy the game a lot for a 0.1. Hope you will be able to update it fast, it just started to be interesting ! 
- Jul 22, 2017
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I really liked the game @Shaso it flows well and not too troubled about the clothes change as that can be sped up by holding down the <enter> key.
There are only two things that I noticed...
1.) The biggest is continuity, you may want to change some of the dialogue with the Mafia Boss and the Detective to give more than two weeks for Naomi (the Player) to come up with the money and two days to talk to make a decision for the Detective, as I spend 5 nights alone (1 week) to unlock to unlock all of the current content in the game... I would say if you want to keep it at Two Weeks, but have the Mafia Boss give more time to Naomi for a "favor" that would work for the purpose of storytelling... or extend the option.
2.) There are some areas where the dialogue isn't translated from Russian to English yet (a couple of the NPC's in Downside of the City and during the dinner scene where Naomi is thinking about her mom).
Otherwise a very solid beginning and look forward to future updates!!
There are only two things that I noticed...
1.) The biggest is continuity, you may want to change some of the dialogue with the Mafia Boss and the Detective to give more than two weeks for Naomi (the Player) to come up with the money and two days to talk to make a decision for the Detective, as I spend 5 nights alone (1 week) to unlock to unlock all of the current content in the game... I would say if you want to keep it at Two Weeks, but have the Mafia Boss give more time to Naomi for a "favor" that would work for the purpose of storytelling... or extend the option.
2.) There are some areas where the dialogue isn't translated from Russian to English yet (a couple of the NPC's in Downside of the City and during the dinner scene where Naomi is thinking about her mom).
Otherwise a very solid beginning and look forward to future updates!!
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Awesome game so far. The best art I've seen in an RPGM game in a long time. Is your dad the end of this version? I've done the massage, movie and tea many many many times. My relationship keeps going up, but nothing changes. All areas outside the house are locked and I can't do anything but talk to dad, change clothes and shower.
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Yep, dad is the end of this version, for next updates, I'll make little guide/ or list of possible events, so it'd be easier.
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Thaks! I'll attend to this!
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Oh, yea, already in next version
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Do you plan on having the MC lose a limb and get an artificial one at some point? Maybe as a major choice in the game. The question just popped out of my mind since the smog and loosing limbs looks like a major part of the world. Just asking out of curiosityYou must be registered to see the links
Yep, dad is the end of this version, for next updates, I'll make little guide/ or list of possible events, so it'd be easier.
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Thaks! I'll attend to this!
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Oh, yea, already in next version
- Jun 28, 2017
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I really liked it for it's themes. The art is a bit anime with artist who's only good on specific angles/povs and rest looking off, but it's good enough to not be an issue.
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Are you planning on allowing her to use the toilet in her apartment in a future update Shaso? I really love the art and scenes for the game so far, wouldn't mind a cute peeing scene as some icing on the cake :3
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can somebody link a save thats right after she destroys the boxes in the store. i can't get past it.
- May 5, 2017
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it take some time but you can do it... your speed is faster than him so you need to run in circle to outrun him before start hitting
second is he directly follow you... so you can somehow bugged him to stuck into places and hit everything...
The start was a bit slow but I enjoying it, looking forward to the future releases.
- Oct 4, 2017
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I'm not even done with it, but I'm loving it, I love the setting and the characters, and the focus on the story, I can see a lot of the background and it's not just some "this is the scenario, aaaaand now porn." I'm definitely impressed, hope to see more in the future
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According to patreon dlmur update 0.2 is up now.
0.2 w/bugfix
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- May 21, 2017
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If the last thing you played was 0.1 then 0.2 has quite a bit of new content.
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According to the dialog it will be added on the next update, so 2 months from now.