RPGM Dilmur [v0.19a] [Shaso]

[johndoe1545]

so @Shaso , any full save? the save editor show everything in russian, and i am too lazy to restart everything

 

[deadspin]

@deadspin, finish the quest with the orphanage.

It worked, great game as it's one few games I look forward too

 

[Dharak]

Can't save on Mac can't return from profile/setting either...

 

[deluges]

Humour is also very important in this kind of game. Yet I can't remember having read even a single joke. I'm not sure there were any in the game. But even if they were, me not remembering doesn't speak for their quality. If this game was 100% serious, dark, gritty and rapey, I'd understand the absence of humour. But it isn't. It has more of a romcom vibe. Just without the com part. This is, again, a problem of the setting. I'm not sure if its supposed to be a dark gritty drama or an uplifting romance.

I found that there was quite a bit of visual humor in the game, which makes up for it lacking in the dialogue. In particular Noemi's facial expressions are perfect. If you didn't find Calix putting on a ski mask funny, I don't know what to tell you. The first meeting with Rufina was funny as well.

 

[Gregor34674]

quick start only goes up to 0.4. Does that mean we have to play 0.5 again or do saves from 0.5 work in 0.6?

 

[Xpl0it]

Female protagonist, incest, corruption, rape and beautiful renders! What an awesome game!
I played through it yesterday in one sitting and i loved it!

Also imho RPGM is a very necessary and essentiell part of the charm this game has. If it would have been renpy and i would have been able to skip forward, i totally would have done that and therefore ruined a lot of the mood. Also it would have been over in 30 minutes instead of the 4 hours+ that i spend on it.

Cannot wait to see more of the dirty smut this game seems to eventually offer. I especially love the dirty old guys, the restaurant owner was a huge turn on and i hope he is coming back! The Service Center guy also seems like a good dirty pervert and i first expected to have to deal with him but sadly there was no content yet.

Im not sure if i broke something in the game because i edited the save to have more money and LST points (yes im a dirty cheater) but i had a bug where i was in my room and the mirror on the top side showed an event bubble but standing in front of it and clicking Enter or space didnt do anything.

Overall, great game! Hope to see more dirty events with all the characters that are already available, and as usual please give us some god old painful ass fucking!

 

[Xpl0it]

I've got to say, your art is amazing. It's hands down the best original art I've seen in any patreon game. You also created a near-perfect female MC. She's every nerd's wet dream. Cyberpunk settings are quite rare, so that would theoretically be a plus as well.

However, your game lacks the most essential things in my opinion: Proper writing, humour and world building. Despite its cyberpunk setting, the world doesn't feel cyberpunky. Their flat is just a regular family flat, the run down neighbourhood is just a run-down neighbourhood and the city square is tidier than most IRL squares. Meanwhile you have a post-apocalyptic vibe where your MC goes through old world trash to find useful stuff. But there's nothing else post-apocalyptic in the world.

Your setting is all over the place. It's a weird mix of cyberpunk, post apocalypse and current day. That just doesn't work. Stick with one theme and the overall quality will improve immensely.

Next up is the story itself. It feels recycled and rather basic. It actually feels like an afterthought in your work. You also have lots and lots of pics for very little actual story. It feels like you're investing 90% of your time and energy in drawing the art. Again, your art fucking rocks. But truth be told, that's not what makes or breaks a game. The amount of art you created would be enough for 3 games with a proper story. And that's what you should aim for, in my opinion.

Humour is also very important in this kind of game. Yet I can't remember having read even a single joke. I'm not sure there were any in the game. But even if they were, me not remembering doesn't speak for their quality. If this game was 100% serious, dark, gritty and rapey, I'd understand the absence of humour. But it isn't. It has more of a romcom vibe. Just without the com part. This is, again, a problem of the setting. I'm not sure if its supposed to be a dark gritty drama or an uplifting romance.

This is actually a problem I see in quite a few games. They create the story as they go. Some people certainly are able to pull that off. I feel like you aren't. That's not a bad thing, though. It just means that you should write the story first and create the game around it, not the story around the game. Or alternatively, find someone to write a story for you. There's plenty talented writers who'd love to have their stories realized with an artist as capable as yourself.

Sorry if I sound too negative and nagging. I tend to get quite passionate abound things I'm intrigued by. And your game certainly intrigued me.

First of all: Thanks that you took the time to write such a nice and long comment. Thats great and i understand that you are passionate about the game, so am i, but i have to disagree with some parts that you mentioned:

1. You are forgetting that the whole basis for this game is the RPGM framework which simply doesnt really offer lots of cyberpunk assets. Every Game that is build with it shares the same basic mechanics and graphics for rooms, walls, places. And that is also the reason why people use it. Because there is so much stuff already there that they dont have to create themselves. And i think that is perfectly fine. The game developer should concentrate on other more important things than creating pixelated room walls just for the game to look more cyberpunkish.

I for myself, liked the atmosphere and everything worked out perfectly fine together.

2. The graphics are amazing no doubt. But i wouldnt say there is enough Art for 3 Games, instead i would have liked to see more dirty sex scenes. To me the art absolutely is essential and it is a dealbreaker if you dont do it right. The story without it wouldnt be an intersting game at all. That doesnt mean that the story isnt essentiell either, both have to work together to create a good game and neither of them can be neglected.

3. Humour is absolutely unnecessary for an erotic game to be honest. While it can create a more comfortable atmosphere and a character you can more identify with basically all top 10 games you find here dont use humour at all.
I also dont really see your problem with the game neither being 100% rape nor 100% romance. While im more a fan of the first one i dont have a problem with my little fuckslut falling in love with someone. Thats fine.

4. Ofc the story has its downsides, you are right about that. Its not J.K. Rowling writing the story, but there is basically a whole industry out there making weird ass porn movies with the worst possible plots you can even imagine, and nobody cares. While a perfect story would absolutely help i usually just give the advice not to overdo it and to limit the expectations. Stay simple and stay focused on creating erotic content. Dont lose yourself in some drama cyberpunk story and just let the girl get fucked. To me the story as it is would already be perfectly sufficient and its even a little bit too much and many possible side events are stuck and creating the image of content being littered all over the place.
Just to remind you: The Game started as a blackmail story with an evil mafia dude, that basically never appeared again.

Hope you all have a nice day. Cheers.

 

[Muntakim360]

how far can u go with luka?

 

[Fireboyo01]

One of the best games on this site. The art is fantastic and there is lots of content. Looking forward to more!

 

[rafa30]

Can someone share a full save game?
please

 

[ktoloco]

Can someone share a full save game?
please

Is for 0.6b

 

[Jaam]

Im stuck at progress 24 with Agapiy, anyone knows what to do to advance ?

 

[UncleVT]

Shaso
Apr 17 at 5:01am
Time for the feedback!

Hello everyone, it’s me again with another feedback.

As I have already said, 0.7 update will be dedicated specifically to Calix. I will not publish a poll with voting for the continuation of events for secondary characters. I’m fully focusing on the Calix’s route. By the looks of it, I’m thinking there will be about 12,000 – 15,000 words. All the arts will be made in an erotic or pornographic style.

No changes on the technical side. Maybe I’ll hook up an autosave plugin.

Currently, I have already started working actively on the text and drafts for the polls.

That’s about it. Can’t tell you more details, cause, as usual, I prefer you to see everything in the update itself.

Thank you for your attention and support!

 

[Deleted member 1300488]

When you release 7 could you please also release a current (Working) save that goes with it that keeps our progress current. See a lot of comments about needing this, or a fix or a patch.

 

[Deleted member 1300488]

One of the peps supporting a bit on Patreon. I could use a hand, and hate to ask a bit embarrassed. So I have played twice do not want to do the grind again and somehow could never unlock um... their first shall we say consummation. So is there anyone anal out there with their saves that have it right before then with most of the stuff done. Do not want to use memories for it, want to work it from their... pardon the pun Thanks in Advance!

 

[ltpika]

Full save was posted a bit ago, use the search

 

[Desaster]

Really wish there was an android version, want to know whats beyond 0.4 (cant plyay on pc...for reasons...)but liked what i saw in 0.4

 

[Obzen]

Any one have 0.6 walkthrough???

+1, anyone have walkthrough please?

 

[Fake Rabi ~]

0.6 is out and here I am excitedly waiting hope the android version will be released soon :3

 

[Deleted member 1300488]

Wasn't after a full save, wondering if anyone has a save for after they are done with a lot of the quests but before they go on their first fruitful date!