HTML Abandoned Dimension Breeding [v0.0.1] [SomeSneakyDev]

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Overview:
It seems like a normal day at the office, but suddenly you hear a strange noise.
After you begin investigating the source of the noise, you suddenly find yourself transported to another world, unlike anything you've ever seen before. Here, your objective extends beyond mere survival; you are tasked with breeding and nurturing various creatures, embarking on a unique and challenging adventure.​

Thread Updated: 2023-10-05
Release Date: 2023-10-05
Developer: SomeSneakyDev
Censored: No
Version: 0.0.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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[Bob69]

SomeSneakyDev Congratulations on your first release! Good luck!

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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Deleted member 2626380]

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[Deleted member 2626380]

Btw, the game is typically a tech demo for now, posted it to see a feedback and some suggestions. Hope you will have fun playing it

 

[Crell]

I'll be honest, while I like the concept, releasing a game this barebones and lacking of basically any content is kinda useless. It's like a pre-pre-pre-alpha. If your "breeding" consists of picking giver, receiver and then clicking a button and then not even being able to name the offspring or get any info on them or to distinguish them from one another you don't have a game. You have barely a concept of a game.

Also, not that big of a fan of Isekai stuff. Especially when the other worlds are mere simulations and nothing even happens for real. But that's an artistic choice and I'm sure there are many people who love it.

 

[Furmilk]

I kind of agree with Crell; while I'm all about giving feedback to help a dev improve, there's nothing to really comment on here given how early this seems to be. Let's give it a shot anyway. I see you have descriptors for victory and defeat sex with the goblins in the portals, but why none for breeding with your own? I'd figure given the title and subject the first scenes and focus would be breeding, not the random sex. I'm also personally partial to birthing scenes given this is a breeding game, though maybe include a setting to disable that for people who don't. On that subject, a way to remove some of the monsters would be a good idea, had a barn full of about 30 goblins real quick due to curiosity. Also, why include exp and mana crystals if neither of them do anything yet? I tried to level up only to find out it went over 1000. Even if it's something simple, give something to use the resources on. Finally, the goblin portal itself feels redundant. You get a goblin for free with whom you can breed an army without ever bringing any more goblins back.

 

[smith66]

I look forward to trying this out in the future good luck to you.

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

embarking on a unique and challenging adventure.

Is this 'unique and challenging adventure' going to have actual art?

 

[Deleted member 2626380]

I kind of agree with Crell; while I'm all about giving feedback to help a dev improve, there's nothing to really comment on here given how early this seems to be. Let's give it a shot anyway. I see you have descriptors for victory and defeat sex with the goblins in the portals, but why none for breeding with your own? I'd figure given the title and subject the first scenes and focus would be breeding, not the random sex. I'm also personally partial to birthing scenes given this is a breeding game, though maybe include a setting to disable that for people who don't. On that subject, a way to remove some of the monsters would be a good idea, had a barn full of about 30 goblins real quick due to curiosity. Also, why include exp and mana crystals if neither of them do anything yet? I tried to level up only to find out it went over 1000. Even if it's something simple, give something to use the resources on. Finally, the goblin portal itself feels redundant. You get a goblin for free with whom you can breed an army without ever bringing any more goblins back.

Thanks for feedback, got it. Btw lvlup button is at home, guess should make it on ui bar on the left.

 

[Deleted member 2626380]

Is this 'unique and challenging adventure' going to have actual art?

It will. Made some sketches, but will do something else because of plans on changeable body features.

 

[riadhloch]

I'll be honest, while I like the concept, releasing a game this barebones and lacking of basically any content is kinda useless. It's like a pre-pre-pre-alpha. If your "breeding" consists of picking giver, receiver and then clicking a button and then not even being able to name the offspring or get any info on them or to distinguish them from one another you don't have a game. You have barely a concept of a game.

Also, not that big of a fan of Isekai stuff. Especially when the other worlds are mere simulations and nothing even happens for real. But that's an artistic choice and I'm sure there are many people who love it.

So, it's like 12% of a game?

At least that's better than 11%!

 

[Oliz82]

Hello.

A new bi game is always welcome. Though it's difficult to asses it since it's so short.

The worldbuilding is very limited but fitting.
The characters are too few but at least different.
The plot is interesting but could become repetitive.
The artistic side is absent for now but the presentation is nice.

The MC is sent to another world to breed the various species living there.
There's not much to do : an introduction, a simple battle system (fighting or seducing) and an easy management one with our monsters waiting to be inseminated.

If all we have to do is capture a monster to make children, it will quickly become redundant.

Remarks :
We should be able to meet later a goblin we choose to fuck instead of catching. The child should have a different education and more receptive to lust (or anything you see fit). The same if we lose the fight, we should become pregnant.

It isn't indicated if our monsters are pregnant when checking.


This funny bad end shouldn't be a dead end. Also, why a female goblin since it's possible for it to be male or neither?

While creating Boblin, we can choose for it to be asexual, which leads to strange choices :

and a strange form :

though it doesn't prevent it from being pregnant.

But the most strange thing is that we can make ourselve pregnant .

Also, you should write "Anal pregnancy/MPREG". It's more meaningful for some people.

Good continuation.

 

[Crell]

It will. Made some sketches, but will do something else because of plans on changeable body features.

You really should look at the paper dolls from Broken Dreams for that. They are amazing in their simplicity. Actual artwork is very time consuming and requires focus and dedication if you want to do it right. It might not be the best thing for your project.

 

[harem.king]

Also, not that big of a fan of Isekai stuff. Especially when the other worlds are mere simulations and nothing even happens for real. But that's an artistic choice and I'm sure there are many people who love it.

I love isekai, but a simulation is not an isekai, it is a video game inside a video game.
I hate those. as you said, everything is meaningless.
being told by the game "this is only a dream / video game" ruins suspension of disbelief, which ruins immersion.

 

[CboyC95]

What? No lesbian?

 

[MilesKiyaAnny]

I bored af let see how much content are there. I love resouceful kind of games. Make use of "everything" soo hope this stay faithful til out of early acesss

dang, I played and there no porn yet huh welp i guess done til next year

 

[yunasenna]

Though the game is demo, I have high hopes for it, I can't wait to see what else that you do with the game.

 

[AlexTorch]

Is a little rough on the edges, but the idea is good, yeah, could be a lot better if used another engine, but still, 0.0.1 still really early build to judge anything, cannot wait to see future version and improvements.

 

[qepoa]

VNs need lots of art to look nice and breeding games need even more. I'm encouraging OP but also noting that we should all keep our expectations in check. It sounds like a lot of work if it follows the usual style.