To play devil's advocate against myself here, the risk with a slower, more detailed pace of character (sexual) development is that you'll turn off the people who like to jump quickly into the porn action and don't like a slower drawn out advancement of that. For example, I think DmD is great with the slow development of the sexual relationship between the main characters, but I know other people just think its a ridiculously drawn-out exercise in blue-balling the audience. You've got some of us complaining a bit about the fast pace now, but if you changed things you might have even more complaining about the slow-down later. People tend not to be as vocal about the stuff that's working just fine for them after all. If you think a slower pace is worth trying, perhaps experimenting with having a slower, more detailed view of just a single character's corruption and polling patrons about how its working out would be a reasonably safe way to try something new without rocking the boat too much.