I really wish Dob hired a good smut writer.
His videos are top notch technically, and his girls are very attractive.
But the content just isn't very kinky. The girls never struggle with inner conflict, and everybody just likes to have sex, and there aren't any real consequences. Sure Dob tries to insert dialogue like "I've come to end it" but he simply can't pull it off.
In one scene the girl says "don't cum in me", the next everything about that is just forgotten. There are never any regret or drama. The girls never seem to react much at all, never mind feeling embarrassment, regret, or irritation. All of them shed their clothes at a moment's notice; none of them are the least bit hesitant or shy or reluctant.
Also, the series can't really pull off the escalation that is the hallmark of a good stroke story.
If Kelly in episode #1 has sex with her black neighbor, then why is the exact same thing happening in episode #2. Why can't she knock on his door in her sexy dress only to find he's not at home, but two of his street homies are, and they won't take no for an answer, and before Kelly knows it, they've aroused her to the point where dancing naked with two complete thug strangers seems like a good idea. And then she's intensely ashamed when she returns home.
Why is Rachel #2 mostly a repeat of Rachel #1, just with another athlete? Why is Rachel openly interested in combining her job and her sex life, basically removing all the drama even before it has the chance to build? If she considered herself a "proper girl" that only made a "misstep" in episode #1, and then felt really embarrassed when she was found out wearing the second guy's outfit (with NOTHING UNDERNEATH!) but still was talked into stripping naked for the interview, the story would effortlessly have become much more hot.
A good writer could inject some much needed quality in the writing, because everything else about the videos is already good to excellent. Dob is a good video artist but he's so damn milquetoast when it comes to writing scenarios and dialogue!