VN Ren'Py Domino Beach [Ep.1] [Mr Jet]

[glassofwater22]

I just started and had to post this.



That face is absolutely fucking terrifying. XD

This ain't a porn game, it's a horror game! (I mean, who gets fired within the first 10 slides? Lol.)

 

[AchedCroissant]

Surfer Zoe. I guess you have a type.

My type are best girls

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Promising game, Mr.Jet has done it again, good opening and those faction divisions have a very familiar vibe. When MC got to a meeting of Rebels group and rock music started playing, the moment with the test, their reaction to how MC confronted Rex - it was all a feeling of déjà vu, but pleasant.

Girls:
At the moment, Zoe wins my attention. Zoe the surfer, all the missing is blue hair
Open minded and rebellious one. Best one.


Worth the attention:
Riley (not Reid)

Fiona

And this girl, Alex. Cunty move she did, but looks hot, we'll see.


Two question:
1. What the fuck is that thing?:

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2. MrJet WHERE THE REDHEADS?

 

[Skylaroo]

It wouldn't make sense that almost every surfer were girls.
People forget that an AVN could tell a story too and that's why I disagree when people were crying about the sister being not fuckable in his last game. When you see their relationship, it couldn't be otherwise.

Where did I say I want "almost every surfer were girls"? I literally used Tony as the example. I didn't even ask for more LI girls. Both of you are disagreeing with something that you made up yourself lol.

My point is that so far it seems that the girls are not the main plot-related characters because I assume the plot conflict will revolve around Blake, Mike, Tony, Vince, Ricky and potentially that big trash collector guy as well as Rex's dad for a complete sausage fest. They are the ones with power/authority to get the plot going while the girls are relegated to support and/or just for sex purposes. This is in comparison to BARS where the sister (for the plot related to the father/family) and the two band girls (for the rock star plot) are directly related to plot line. So I'm just saying that it'd be nice if there are female plot-only characters too instead of all-male cast. We are capable of telling a story using female character (as shown with both sisters in BARS).

The male to female ratio looks pretty good here, but we only care about the MC and who he hooks up or ends up with, the other guys don't matter.

At the moment, there are more male characters than female characters. Just feels a bit bad that there are so many characters that don't matter taking up development time and slowing down progression with the girls. But it's completely understandable if you don't feel the same way.

Try to stop imposing your tastes and preferences as a form of valid 'criticism', cuz that's a you problem, not an actual one. If Mr.Jet and his supporters like this type of proportions on female characters, you can't do anything about it but respect their opinion and keep playing the game as it is or move on to other games with a female cast according to your personal preferences.

The only actual problem here is, IMHO, the idiotic-looking, weak, seemingly beta MC, who's just another lame, beta brokey wimp scoring pussy for 'the plot'. That's hilariously ridiculous and far-fetched, when you think about how entitled and ridiculously pretentious a lot of modern, attractive women like the ones in the game really are IRL.

It's a you problem if it's you. It's an actual problem if it's mine.

 

[LaShou23]

Where's the mandatory freckled redhead?

 

[MiltonPowers]

Where's the mandatory freckled redhead?

Gotta be there somewhere. I Understand that it is fairly strict law that must be adhered to.

 

[michaelangelogago25]

A new Mr Jet game! Awesome!

 

[kkkkxiaolang]

finally my man

 

[SlowGoesSlow]

Neat setting my only grievance is the MC kinda simped too hard on a few of the girls right out of the gate, before we as a player really even knew anything about them. Due to that none of the LI’s really gripped me, but it was only the first episode so I’m hopeful that will change. The setting is interesting and the MC’s situation is a neat set up. Looking forward to see where this goes. Also, when the MC shows up at his job after he shaves he automatically regrows his facial hair when he puts on his uniform.

 

[Aramintha]

Loved it that was a nice start hooked me right from the get go I really liked Zoe and Fiona they both are gorgeous cant wait for the next episode already I do hope Nikki has a route or something I find her appearance really hot.

 

[Skylaroo]

Loved it that was a nice start hooked me right from the get go I really liked Zoe and Fiona they both are gorgeous cant wait for the next episode already I do hope Nikki has a route or something I find her appearance really hot.

Definitely looking forward to see how Nikki's character/story unfolds since we haven't really had much to do with the Kings yet. Same with the blonde girl and Kath too.

 

[Calz]

Honestly a fantastic start had a blast playing, can't wait for more.

Well done MrJet You just might have something really special here.

 

[Jacowboy]

Holy shit!!! Bro, congrats MrJet this is a HUGE improvement over BAR... I was very pleasantly surprised... everything is just better, the story, the characters, the MC, the music, the sound effects, the writing, the visual storytelling, the comedic beats, etc... AND it's also one of the best first releases I've seen... damn... color me impressed!

I'll just voice my very tiny gripe so far, and it's with the internal dialogues of the MC, some of those are clunky... redundant and unnecessary, tbh... you're already doing a great job at showing thinga, so there's no real need to also tell in some cases... but other than that, good job for real.

Wish you luck on your new game but I suspect you'll do really well with this one, so keep it up.

 

[Ghost'']

Domino Beach [Ep.1] Unofficial Android Port + scrappy's WT Mod

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[jish55]

Of all the girls, I'm digging Riley the most and hope she gets a nice chunk of content the next update.

 

[Ragnar]

Great start, the only thing I didn't like was Alex and Olivia prank but that's how those bitches roll so fuck them.

 

[Zohmbie]

Very promising! great renders, characters feel alive and the plot's kinda average but im a sucker for those haha, can't wait to see more, hopefully soon

 

[MaliPizdek]

is MC black? what kind of a skin is that?
btw that blonde from a home screen, where is she?

 

[cxx]

is MC black? what kind of a skin is that?
btw that blonde from a home screen, where is she?

maybe he has some latino blood in him.

 

[Jacowboy]

is MC black? what kind of a skin is that?
btw that blonde from a home screen, where is she?

1st question: are you blind or something?

2nd question: pretty sure that blonde is the one who's topless on the beach, the asshole surfer's girlgriend.