Hey! I really enjoyed the tension at the beginning — both in the writing and the pacing. Too bad it turned out to be a dream, haha. Despite the short runtime, the scenes worked really well! The only thing that threw me off a bit was Ace laughing at almost everything. But overall, it ended on a great note when reaching the mansion. Awesome intro! Congrats — I’m really looking forward to seeing the horror potential unfold in the next updates.
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